My OC- Thorne busch

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Thorne Busch

2014 Jul 25, 15:17:14 Last Edit: 2014 Jul 25, 15:43:58 by Thorne Busch
I was bored, so why not make a page about my OC?!  :D
please forgive this OC, Im still working out the kinks, and will soon have more to put on this page. also feel free to critique him (or completely rip in to him)


name: Thorne Busch

age: 20

race: earth pony

gender: male

cutie mark: grey paw print

coat: reddish brown
mane: black
(rather plain, but he doesn't mind)

some information:

Spoiler: show


1:What's your OCs favorite color?

Green and Brown!

2:Where does your OC work?

for the Manehattan board of Natural History and Archaeology

3:What's your OCs favorite food?

anything he can find

4:Does your OC have a favorite drink?

Ice tea

5:How old is your OC?

the same age as the mane six

6:Does your OC have any supernatural power?

no. hes not a unicorn.

7:Is your OC in a relationship?

does a relationship with himself count?

8:What are some of your OCs strengths?

courage, intelligence, and an innate sense of adventure.

9:What are some of your OCs weaknesses?

he has a rather weak will, especially around food or money. hes also headstrong

10:What is your OCs favorite outfit?

anything with a camo pattern

11:What is your OCs spirit animal?

a timberwolf

12:Is your OC currently in school?

no

13:What is your OCs earliest memory?

looking up at the moon

14:Does your OC have a cell phone? If so, what kind?

he doesnt trust cell phones

15:What makes your OC angry?

getting cheated

16:When is your OCs favorite time of year?

fall

17:How long can your OC hold their breath?

around sixty seconds

18:What is your OCs favorite holiday?

does midsummer's eve count?

19:What usually bums your OC out?

hunger. lack of money

20:What's your OCs favorite kind of pizza?

cheese

21:Who is your OCs best friend?

no one at the moment

22:Has your OC ever been arrested?

...I dont have to answer this.... :I

23:Whats your OCs biggest secret?

he's a real softie

24:What does your OC smell like?

sap and mud

25:What time of year does your OC prefer?

summer/fall

26:What race is your OC?

earth pony

27:What languages does your OC speak?

uhh...English..I guess

28:Does your OC like anime? Western Cartoons?

he enjoys them from time to time

29:Can your OC swim?

he once had to tread water for 9 hours

30:What would be your OCs favorite movie?

Rise of the Planet of the Apes

31:Does your OC believe in fairies?

he'll believe in anything if people give him enough money/food

32:Did your OC go to college? What did they major in?

He took courses at Manehattan University, majoring in Natural History

33:How many family members does your OC have?

5

34:Is your OC a huge fan boy/girl over anything?

nature

35:How flexible is your OC?

he's pretty big, so not that much

36:What if they were gender bent?

so what? life goes on. at least he would probably be more agile

37:What was your OCs first word?

"dog"

38:Does your OC have any pets?

not at the moment

39:Who is your OCs biggest enemy?

no one in particular

40:What is the craziest thing your OC has done?

he once kissed a timberwolf

41:What is your OCs motto about life?

it changes daily

42:Does your OC drink coffee or tea?

tea

43:Who is your OCs biggest hero?

Daring Do

44:What color eyes does your OC have?

green/brown

45:Does your OC like reading?

very much

46:Is your OC loyal?

if youre his friend/employer

47:Does your OC tolerate violence?

it depends

48:What social class is your OC?

middle-class, but he can pull off acting as upper/lower classes too

49:What country was your OC born in?

'questria

50:Does your OC cry easily?

sometimes...but you better not tell anyone or else  >:/

51:What is your OCs favorite genre of music?

oldies

52:How does your OC feel about insects?

grasshoppers kinda weird him out, but its not a big deal

53:What are your OCs hobbies?

birdwatching, fishing

54:Does your OC use any medication?

uhhh, no o.O

55:What gender is your OC?

male

56:What kind of clothes or accessories does your OC wear?

usually none

57:Would you call your OC adventurous?

definitely

58:Is your OC social?

when he wants to be

59:What is the first thing that someone would notice about your OC?

the fact that hes usually dirty

60:Does your OC enjoy nature?

nature is part of what he does every day.



the only picture I have at the moment.  >.< i don't know anyone who's good at arts. I also have yet to import a cutie mark. sorry.



aaaand a little bit about himself

Spoiler: show


Thorne Busch really tries to be good, but as his name implies, he has a rather thorny personality. He's been headstrong ever since he was a foal, and preferred to be outside playing games by himself rather than spending time with his family/few friends. He was born in Appleloosa, and lived there for a while until his family moved closer to Canterlot, where his relatives were. he grew up going to school and spending his free time playing in the White Tail Woods. there he learned about the forest and all it's inhabitants, even the timberwolves that had wander from Everfree. He became a natural at tracking and observing animals of all kinds. when he finished foal school, he left his home to live with his relatives in Manehattan, where he took courses in Natural History. he ended up with a job working for the Manehattan Board of Natural history and Archeology as a field researcher in the Everfree forest, as well as the surrounding province. Hes is often commissioned to "collect" or record specimens in their natural habitat. Hes courageous, and loves adventure, but can often be overbearing and obnoxious around other ponies (he often considers city ponies "weak"). even though he's headstrong and stubborn, he often has a weak will around money or food. However, he is courageous and loyal, (especially to someone who feeds him), and loves a good adventure!


family resemblemance?!


Luminescence

Well, well, well! This character is rather well made, if not presented the same.

Firstly, the name will forever bother me. As is common with naming, the name matches up really closely to what he does/is. It is interesting that it more closely matches his personality than his talent. However, the name Thorne Busch is rather clearly based upon Thorn Bush, unless you meant to name him after TV shows and Alcohol.

Secondly, there isn't a whole lot given about his past. This is rather common, and unneeded for a character. However, I (next to )always recommend having more detail to a character than less. Also, what detail there is, is spread about and not collected. Most people won't be digging through that mound of Q&A to figure out what he likes.

There isn't much more to be said against this character, so congrats! Just minor tweaking here and there and you will be okay in my book!
I believe the shape of happiness resembles glass. Even though, we don't usually notice it, it's still definitely there, we merely need to change our point of view slightly, and that glass will sparkle whenever it reflects the light. I doubt that anything else can argue its own existence so perfectly

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