StaticBoom's OCs

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2012 Oct 27, 22:47:18 Last Edit: 2015 Mar 15, 02:28:25 by StaticBoom
Static Boom:
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Name: Static Boom
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Species: Pegasus

Personality: StaticBoom has a two sided personality, most of the time he is quiet and timid, he only speaks out and acts confident when he is with friends. Because he is usually timid and quiet, he has alot of trouble dealing with anger, so his other personality is born. If somepony annoys him for a long time or if they say something offensive to him or his friends, Static becomes cold and bitter, snaping at anypony who tries to talk to him until he calms down. In this state he is violent if provoked.

Other:  Static gets very clingy to every friend he makes and he gets nervous and snappy if they leave his side
He is an absolute amazing singer and he can scream really well too.
He is a very skillful flier and will rely on that in most fights.

Appearance:[spoiler]
With cutie mark -->:
[IMG]http://i44.tinypic.com/25g9dlt.jpg[/img]
Without:
[IMG]http://i61.tinypic.com/242hok3.png[/img]

This was drawn by my friend Cam, you can find her here> http://psychotic-deathy.deviantart.com/
[IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/2gxfwp1.png[/img] By Cam^


History: Static was born and raised in Cloudsdale with his Mum and Dad, he was a slacker all through school and really kept to himself, his parents had trouble figuring him out. He suffered ridicule as he had no cutie mark while mostly EVERYPONY did and he often skipped school and classes, he got in trouble with teachers alot because he would often become quite enraged during school time, he would talk back to teachers and he wouldn't pay attention. He dropped out of school and told his parents he wanted to move as the Cloudsdale 'vibe' really freaked him out and he didn't fit in well with the other pegasi, his father got mad as Static was an accomplished flyer and thought he would do just fine. But none the less Static moved out of Cloudsdale into the quieter atmosphere of Ponyville.


Cutie Mark: Static's cutie mark is a microphone with its cord winding behind it and sparking at the  end. His special talent is singing in ways like his personality, he might start out quiet and sweet in a song but then changing to loud and gripping. He got his cutie mark when his friend Diesel Spark encouraged him enough to do a show, when he went through his final song, the ponies cheered extra loud and Static pushed himself into his signature style, thus his cutie mark appeared.

Fun Facts:Static as a very large obsession with beanies, he has a closet FULL of them, in different colors, patterns and styles. If you give him a beanie, he will love you forever.

Theme Song(s):
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Diesel Spark:
Spoiler: show
Name: Diesel Spark
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Unicorn

Personality: Diesel is a caring and fun loving guy most of the time. He acts in a rough and tough sort of way and loves a good roughhouse but only if he knows he won't be able to badly injure the other pony. He cares for everypony he meets and tries to see the good side of everypony, but if he can see that somepony is out to hurt the innocent, he will not hold back and will rush into trying to stop them, even if he is very unprepared.
He's especially caring of those who are weaker and those who often have trouble with things. He loves to help.

Other: Diesel is an engineer,diesel fitter, mechanic, inventor all combined. He loves tinkering with junk and scrap parts to see what he can make and he loves fixing things. He loves making things with wheels that go FAST.
He is Static Booms best friend and he cares for him like an older brother

Cutie Mark:Diesels cutie mark is a metal cog (excuse the horrible drawing) with what looks like an explosion of magic behind it. Diesels special talent is combining his love of inventing junk and his magical abilities to make 'robots' that he controls and uses to help others. He combines his magic and his inventions often sometimes with success, sometimes with failure. He wastes his time using this to make alot of useless inventions that nopony really needs.

[spoiler] Appearance:


History:Diesel was born in Manehattan with his Mum, Dad and younger sister, he loved anything metal since a young age and went to the local junkyard 'fishing' for junk, often dragging his younger sister along. His family was actually relatively poor and Diesel and his sister were in and out of school. Diesel helped support his family with his inventions, selling them to richer, dumber, ponies which allowed enough money for his family to get back on their feet. When Diesel was 19 he moved to Ponyville with his sister. He bought a house for himself and his sister and they lived together. Diesel starting a business selling his inventions, creating inventions at the request of other ponies and fixing things while his sister started a toy shop. After living in ponyville for 3 years he met Static who had just moved in, Static and Diesel became best friends and Static and his little sister became even closer. He let Static move in with him after his sister died and they have been living together since. When Diesel turned 20, he went out to Canterlot for a night of partying, which is where he met Sugar Sparks mother, things began to get heated between the unicorn and the earth pony and 10.15 months later Diesel's daughter was born.

Fun Facts: Diesel hates the authority system. He believes that everyone should govern themselves and that nopony is higher than anyone else. He challenges authority figures as much as he can, but he is certainly not a bad person. This means he dislikes Celestia and Luna governing everyone, he often says they should do their jobs with the sun and moon, then leave everypony be. If you want to annoy Diesel, act higher than everypony else, you will automatically be in his bad books.

Theme Song:

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Rider:
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Name: Rider
Age:18
Gender: Male
Species: Pegasus

Personality: A 'cool dude'. He's a pretty nice guy most of the time, he's relaxed and happy-go-lucky, until you say something bad about his racing or trick ability, then he becomes a very big show off, and he'll keep you in his bad books until you admit he's good. He also gets extremely agitated if you touch his bike with out asking or without him saying you can. He's also has a huge love for fighting, and believe it or not, getting injured. He loves showing off battle scars.

Cutie Mark: Rider's cutie mark is a bike wheel skidding in dirt, cause that's just what Riders good at, ever since he was just a foal, his parents bought him a bike to ride, he loved it, every chance he got he would be on the bike. As he got older he got more adventurous, building jumps and tracks out of dirt and testing his limits with them, one day he did a backflip off a large jump and landed it, thus he got his cutie mark.

Appearance:[spoiler][IMG]http://i50.tinypic.com/14ijvh3.png[/img]


History: Rider grew up in a house near Ponyville, but he went to school in Cloudsdale since his father was a teacher, he was in the same grade as Static Boom and they were close friends. Life was fine for Rider, he was always happy, he grew up, finished school and stayed with his family till' they moved up to cloudsdale so his father, who was getting old, didn't have to make such a big trip everyday. So Rider now lives with his little brother in his parents old house near PonyVille, though he spends most of his time at a dirt track him and Diesel Spark made, occasionally coming into town to show off or just look around.

Fun Facts:With Rider's huge love for fighting, he finds himself as a death metal and death core enthusiast, he loves going to concerts and going wild in the mosh pits. He is that guy you see at  metal concerts starting up the pits. He has a little brother called Trip, who he loves but he won't admit it.
Theme song:

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Trip (Rider's Little Brother- Unfinished)
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Name:Trip
Gender: Male
Species: Pegasus
Age: 7

Personality: Trip is mostly your typical 7 year old. He's adventurous and childish and has a limited understanding of the world. Because he was raised by his brother because his parents were so old when they had him, Trip has the same "cool dude" attitude as Rider. He use's words like dude and bro and stuff frequently, and often mimics his big brother.

Cutie Mark: None yet.
Appearance:[spoiler][IMG]http://i50.tinypic.com/biq6wj.png[/img]


History: Trip was born when his parents were later in their lives. They thought they could look after him at this stage, but they had to rely on Rider more often than not. When Trips parents moved to Cloudsdale, Trip begged to stay in Ponyville with his big brother and go to school there.

Fun Facts: Trip is mostly seen wearing a helmet that was a gift from his brother for his birthday. He only takes it off to sleep and bathe. He has a bandanna as well that he bought when Rider once told him they were cool.[/spoiler]


Bronx the Bull/Pony:
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Name: Bronx
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Species: Bull cross Pony

Personality: Bronx is always moving, he only stops to eat and sleep. He has a very loud personality and is almost never depressed. He can get quite angry however, something he inherited from his father, but his anger is often short lived. He refuses to listen to those he does not respect, so good luck if you're not his parents. He's always looking for adventure and since he just dived head-first into bull puberty, he's also extremely competitive, especially with other males. He has a large soft spot for the elderly and the young however and always looks out for them, playing with the little ones and helping the old ones cross the street. If you become his friend (which isn't that hard) he will always be there to protect you, however he will always expect you to keep up with him, not the other way round.

Appearance: [spoiler][IMG]http://i60.tinypic.com/2rc3hgy.jpg[/img]
[IMG]http://i39.tinypic.com/2zpnj36.png[/img]


Cutie Mark:Bronx's cutie mark is the Reiki symbol for energy (Cho Ku Rei) and stands for Bronx's boundless energy and the extreme control he has over that energy, being able to use it all in one single burst or bit by bit or store it away and not use it at all. His mother came from Japony and studied  Reiki over there, passing on her knowledge of the energy symbol and its uses onto Bronx. Thus his cutie mark acts as both his cutie mark and a provider of energy.

History: Bronx's mother is a mare from Japony and his father is a bull from Appleloosa. Bronx's father met his mother on a trip over to Japony, as his father was actually a very cultured man. However most of the ponies over there found him odd and out of place until he met Bronx's mother and fell in love instantly. After some negotiation, they decided to move to the quaint city of Ponyville where they know Bronx's father would be accepted and their future foal would have all the proper starts at life. Move forward a few years and Bronx was born. He attends school in Ponyville and hopes to become an athlete as he grows older.

Fun Facts:His voice is actually quite high pitched to everyone's surprise and Bronx's dismay. (Think the voice in his theme song.)
Bronx's skull is extremely tough, he can head butt almost anything with out much pain.
He tends to get 'growing pains' in his horns and head butts things quite a bit to get rid of the pain. (Think children sucking things whilst teething)
He hates the fact he doesn't have much of a mane due to his fathers genes.
His parents were extremely surprised when he gained a cutie mark, as they thought he wouldn't have one due to his father.

Theme Song:

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I'm too metal for this.

Snowy

That's good, that's really good. But the only thing I ask for is.. well.. a back story... ^-^ that would make this OC even better then it is now!
((Thanks everyone for the pictures ^-^))

StaticBoom

Oh gosh thats what I forgot  X3

I knew it looked a little bare, I'll do that now, thanks  :D
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I'm too metal for this.

ShadowHeart

awesome oc! not too weak and not too strong

Join the changeling herd, or she'll devour your love!

Gracie Sky

 :c Why would you tragically kill his special somepony?

There are a few contradictions here and there, but nothing I would deem in need of fixing.
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StaticBoom

I know its sad but I did model him after myself and my experiences
It actually helps him to find his cutie mark in the end.(atleast in my head it does)

A little bit of tragedy never really hurt anypony  ovO (well it sorta does but I think you get my point X3)
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I'm too metal for this.

The Wandering Magus

interesting... although what is his cm?  how did he get it?  I thought cm's were the very heart of most ponies... o.O
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StaticBoom

I haven't gotten around to uploading his cutie mark yet, though at the stage of his I life I use to roleplay with, he doesn't have one, his hidden talent is to sing and such, but being such a shy pony he very rarely does it and considers it a little stupid at some times. As soon as I get around to drawing him with his cutie mark at an older age I will put the story in but I do enjoy roleplaying with him as he is now, without a cutie mark ^-^
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The Wandering Magus

Quote from: StaticBoom on 2012 Oct 30, 22:15:09
I haven't gotten around to uploading his cutie mark yet, though at the stage of his I life I use to roleplay with, he doesn't have one, his hidden talent is to sing and such, but being such a shy pony he very rarely does it and considers it a little stupid at some times. As soon as I get around to drawing him with his cutie mark at an older age I will put the story in but I do enjoy roleplaying with him as he is now, without a cutie mark ^-^
17 and still no cm... poor pony x3

I hope you can take a look at some of the RPs I personally GM :)  Pony Cosmology, Royal Academy of Magic, Before Equestria, P&S Adventures, we'd love to have you over :)
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StaticBoom

New pony pal  lol

I'd be happy to have some constructive criticism I guess. I always like improving  ^-^
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The Wandering Magus

Quote from: StaticBoom on 2012 Oct 27, 22:47:18
Diesel Spark:
Spoiler: show
Name: Diesel Spark
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Unicorn
Personality: Diesel is a caring and fun loving guy most of the time. He acts in a rough and tough sort of way and loves a good roughhouse but only if he knows he won't be able to badly injure the other pony. He cares for everypony he meets and tries to see the good side of everypony, but if he can see that somepony is out to hurt the innocent, he will not hold back and will rush into trying to stop them, even if he is very unprepared.
He's especially caring of those who are weaker and those who often have trouble with things. He loves to help.
Other: Diesel is an engineer,diesel fitter, mechanic, inventor all combined. He loves tinkering with junk and scrap parts to see what he can make and he loves fixing things. He loves making things with wheels that go FAST.
He is Static Booms best friend and he cares for him like an older brother
Cutie Mark:Diesels cutie mark is a metal cog (excuse the horrible drawing) with what looks like an explosion of magic behind it. Diesels special talent is combining his love of inventing junk and his magical abilities to make 'robots' that he controls and uses to help others. He combines his magic and his inventions often sometimes with success, sometimes with failure. He wastes his time using this to make alot of useless inventions that nopony really needs.

[spoiler] Appearance:

History:Diesel was born in Manehattan with his Mum, Dad and younger sister, he loved anything metal since a young age and went to the local junkyard 'fishing' for junk, often dragging his younger sister along. His family was actually relatively poor and Diesel and his sister were in and out of school. Diesel helped support his family with his inventions, selling them to richer, dumber, ponies which allowed enough money for his family to get back on their feet. When Diesel was 19 he moved to Ponyville with his sister. He bought a house for himself and his sister and they lived together. Diesel starting a business selling his inventions, creating inventions at the request of other ponies and fixing things while his sister started a toy shop. After living in ponyville for 3 years he met Static who had just moved in, Static and Diesel became best friends and Static and his little sister became even closer. He let Static move in with him after his sister died and they have been living together since.[/spoiler]
Very interesting!  With such talent, he should have been able to receive scholarships from the Royal Academy at Canterlot.  Did he ever attend a university?
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StaticBoom

Unfortunately no, he always wanted to attend a university but he always thought he would have to pay, so he let the thought slide. He would suit a university, but because he grew up in poverty, it was always a far away dream.

Thanks for the comment  :D
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The Wandering Magus

well, all i have to say is that if he ever wished to attend the Royal Academy, he'd have a scholarship and free tuition in no time :)
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StaticBoom

New OC (Rider) every pony, critiques and constructive criticism appreciated  ^-^
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Jenzy

2013 Jan 30, 05:56:11 #14 Last Edit: 2013 Jan 31, 04:12:25 by Jenzy
Rider would be somepony Blaze Drifter might race with B)

Maybe even Jenzy. :3

I don't have the time to critique right now...

EDIT: Their stories are all pretty well made ^-^

I agree with Magus. Diesel Spark seems to be one that should attend the Academy ^-^
(Jenzy might soon teach an Items Class there :3)

Hmm... What's interesting is how them stallions are so skinny, like Fleur de Lis... x3

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