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Title: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jun 01, 08:36:27
Spoiler: Teal • show
General Information
Name-Teal
Race-Pegasus
Age-19
Height-3 feet 4 inches
Cutie Mark-Water drop showing Teal's love for the water.
Likes-Water, swimming, being helpful, playing, Strawberries
Dislikes-slugs and snails, mean ponies, ghosts and all undead, others being hurt/injured
Personality-Cheerful, fearful, slightly paranoid, caring
Other-Teal has been swimming for so long he has developed a natural skill that lets him find water by feeling the moisture in the air through his ears.
Teal has gained the powers of the element of love, allowing him to make anything he can think of in cloud crafting. He can also boost any abilities of his friends by focusing his love energy towards them.
Teal shares half of a heart with a water dragon by the name of Vault (Sonyablademaster). Therefore he lives as long as she does, 1000 years. He can feel what she feels and vice versa.
Spoiler: Image of the Element of Love made by Lusterless Nova-NEW VERSION! • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Love_zps63b391dc.png)

Teal can craft entire buildings of cloud or even armor with his soul element but only with the element.

Bio
Teal grew up in cloudsdale with his parents. At a young age his wings matured to adult size allowing him to fly but his flying skills were quite hazardous. He would often crash into things while flying, making all the other fillies and colts laugh at him. One day his parents took him on a trip to the surface to a lakeside town. There he found his love for water and earned his cutie mark. The years after got better and better for him, learning to fly, making friends, and finally moving into his own home on the surface in Ponyville, to be closer to larger bodies of water.

Spoiler: Photos of Teal • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Teal/Teal-Turken.png)(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Teal/TealTurken.png)


Spoiler: Hershel Ingot • show
General Information
Name-Hershel Ingot
Race-Pegasus
Age-36
Height-3 feet 6 inches
Cutie Mark-Hammer representing his talent for construction
Likes-Fine crafts, fast food
Dislikes-Being Stalled, ponies who are afraid of silly things, laziness
Personality-Strong, loyal, brash, slightly insensitive
OtherIs Teal's father and Creampuff's husband.

Spoiler: Photo of Hershel (Other Artist) • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/hershel_by_keyoshistorm-d4xzz8r-1.jpg)


Spoiler: Creampuff Delight • show
General Information
Name-Creampuff Delight
Race-Pegasus
Age-35
Height-3 feet 4 inches
Cutie Mark-Mixing bowl and spoon representing Creampuff's talents and love for baking.
Likes-Generosity, cuteness, sweets
Dislikes-Cruelty, combat/fighting
Personality-Sweet, loving, caring, defensive, protective
OtherIs mother to Teal and wife to Hershel.

Spoiler: Photo of Creampuff (By Ethereal Nebula) • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Creampuff.png)

Spoiler: Other image in case that one seems off to you • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/myPony3.png)


Spoiler: Sheeby • show
General Information
Name-Sheeby
Race-Unicorn
Age-22
Height-3 feet 4 inches
Cutie Mark-Colored CDs showing her love and talent for CD and Vinyl crafting.
Likes-Fun, parties, getting her way
Dislikes-Rudeness
Personality-Kind, polite, touchy (as in doesn't like to be insulted)
OtherIs Teal's unicorn Cousin.

Spoiler: Photo of Sheeby (By Ethereal Nebula) • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Sheeby-Drawn.png)


Spoiler: Cosmos • show
General Information
Name-Cosmos
Race-Alicorn
Age-17
Height-2 feet 10 inches
Cutie Mark-Blue Galaxy representing his astrological magical abilities.
Likes-Nighttime, peace, kindness
Dislikes-Evil, being ignored
Personality-Subtle, straightforward, obedient, positive, silent
OtherCosmos was an earth pony that made a wish and became an alicorn. Read the bio for the full story.

Bio
Cosmos used to be an ordinary earth pony living a calm life in ponyville. Throughout his childhood he wasn't really appreciated or noticed. He would do his chores, finish his homework, brush his teeth every night.... but his parents didn't care! They would shrug when he made simple gifts for them and ignore him when he told them something important like he got an A on a test. Eventually they started ignoring his entire existence, he no longer received chores, there was no breakfast made for him, and there was no goodbyes or hellos. All he wanted was for them to love him. At the age of 15 he was out watching the stars through a telescope, a little hobby of his. A shooting star shot past and Cosmos made a wish to have the chance to earn his parents love.
One night Cosmos was out watching the stars. He saw a shooting star and made a wish to have the chance to earn his parents love and recognition. He suddenly felt very drowsy and fell asleep outside. He awoke sometime later feeling...different. He sat up and took note that the stars look like words to him, telling him things. He was very confused and he felt some new appendages on his back....wings! He had wings....and a horn! His coat also changed color, from dark brown to black and his mane was very smooth and clean. It became starry and the stars moved along it. He looks up to the night sky hoping the stars will provide an explanation for his transformation. Instead they told him he needed to be prepared for an upcoming opportunity but they didn't say what it was. They taught him how to fly and use his magic, but his magic wasn't like any other unicorn's magic. His magic had stars surround his horn and his spells are all related to the universe such as being able to alter gravity and create nebulas. His training ended at sunrise and the stars told him he was ready. They said he must go home before they vanished in the morning light. Cosmos went home, thinking all he had to do was show off his new powers to his parents but when he got home, he found some kind of wormhole and his parents gone. He entered the wormhole to find them being held captive by some galactic wraith in a sort of void in space. It is revealed there that this wraith was controlling his parents all these years and was planning to use them to steal the elements of harmony at a time when all seemed calm. Cosmos battled the wraith and won but the wraith made one final effort to destroy the ponies and destabilized the void. They only had seconds and Cosmos's parents were trapped by a powerful spell. Cosmos tried to save them but they told him to go before they all were exposed to the vacuum of space. He hesitated but he nodded and he left his parents as they said how much they really cared. The last he sees of his parents is the void collapsing and the wormhole closing

Spoiler: Photo of Cosmos (Pony Creator, edited in mane by me) • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/GalaxyPony.png)


Spoiler: Zappy the Changeling • show

Name-Zappy
Race-Changeling
Age-2
Height-1 foot 6 inches
Disguise formBrown foal with dark brown mane and tail
Likes-Friends, helping
Dislikes-Cruelty, insults, being feared, his own power, most changelings
Personality-Fearful, jumpy, caring, shy
OtherZappy was born with lightning fused with his magic, empowering it but making it very difficult to control.

Bio
Before Zappy was born, his egg got sucked out into a thunderstorm and struck with lightning during the phase of which he develops his horn and magic. It fused with his magical power, imbuing him with lightning powers but like lightning it's very difficult to control and very unpredictable. When the queen discovered his power she tried to make him use it but he ended up killing many other changelings. His very shy, friendly and non violent personality is strange to the changelings and is a very big problem for them all for his mercy on workers and creatures. Zappy had fled from the changeling hive and was welcomed into Ponyville by Lusterless Nova, who took him in. Zappy stayed hidden for a while but eventually was revealed and discovered by other ponies, but they all came to like him for who he is rather than what he is. Other changelings not of Zappy's own had heard of his power and sought him out, finding him in Ponyville. They took him to their queen, who like Zappy's previous queen tried to use his power for personal gain. This time however Zappy used his power to fight back and sent the changelings running, telling them all to never bother him again. He now attends the Ponyville elementary school in the guise of a filly and is learning to better control his magic. As of now, Zappy lives with Jenzy (different user from myself) at his home.

Spoiler: Photo of Zappy (Pony Creator, edited by me) • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Zappy-Changeling-1.png)




Spoiler: Patchwork, Vick's adopted son • show
General Information
Name-Patchwork
Race-Pegasus
Age-6
Height-1.7ft
Likes-Loves Corn, playing
Dislikes-Being told he's an earth pony, being taunted/insulted
Personality-Positive nutty, open minded, foolish
OtherHad lost his wings at the age of 3, before he could ever use them. He comes from a foreign kingdom that only had one town and it was razed by dragons. Patch is the only known pony from this lost kingdom to have survived.
Vick (an OC that belongs to Vick McBread) found Patch under the ground, he had tunneled his way away from the dragons. Vick adopted Patch.

Spoiler: Picture of Patchwork (Pony Creator) • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Patchwork.png)




Spoiler: Shallow Heart the pony loving changeling nurse! • show
General Information
Name-Shallow Heart
Race-Changeling
Age-23
Height-3 feet 8 inches
Likes-Ponies, most fluffy animals, power
Dislikes-Hedgehogs, ice cream, cake, claustrophobic
Personality-Sweet, easily insulted
Other-Shallow Heart has a talent in healing magics, most of which are changeling created but she knows one basic healing spell to use on ponies. She uses more common means of healing ponies like medicine and potions if she has any.
Spoiler: Appearance • show
(http://s6.postimg.org/7ssirhq3l/Untitneled.png) http://s6.postimg.org/7ssirhq3l/Untitneled.png[/img]


Spoiler: Sanny the tiny pony • show
Name- Sanny
Age- 14
Cutie Mark: None
Bio: None
Other:  Sanny herself has no idea where she came from, though she thinks that she was born from the trees that she takes shelter in. Until recently, she had never encountered a normal sized pony in her life. She hasn't yet worked up the courage to speak to anypony, but she has made numerous trips into Ponyville just to explore. It's only thanks to the tree sap she survives on that she can resist being stepped on, kicked and even squished or eaten alive. She has a terrible distaste for the former.
Spoiler: Appearance: Stands just 1 inch tall, usually has some dirt on her. (That's not what the brown spots on her are) • show
(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/343/c/f/sannylcb_by_gdpony-d6xdtnw.png)


Spoiler: Star Rune • show
Name-Star Rune
Race-Earth Pony
Age-19
Height-3 feet, 2 inches ~ He's a little on the short side for a pony.
Likes-
Dislikes-Insects and Arachnids, vegetables, wide open spaces, loud crowded areas/parties
Personality-Courageous, polite, optimistic
Other- Star Rune uses scrolls to conduct magic, particularly wards and banishments. He is a member of an organization assigned with the never ending task of protecting the world of the living and the afterlife from angry spirits, demons and other abnormal, paranormal and otherworldly entities.

Spoiler: Picture of Star Rune • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/ScrollPonyOC_zpsec135bca.png)
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Night Pony on 2012 Jun 01, 08:38:58
So Teal doesn't like undead?Interesting...
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jun 01, 08:47:38
Quote from: Night Pony on 2012 Jun 01, 08:38:58
So Teal doesn't like undead?Interesting...


Oh yeah. With how many bad run ins with the undead he's had he won't be joining there fan club anytime soon.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: PrincessButton on 2012 Jun 01, 09:11:50
I think I've told you this before, but Sheeby is so cute. She's probably my favorite OC appearance wise. :D
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jun 01, 13:13:42
Well Teal usually sees them get summoned and I don't remember you saying they looked ghostly, I pictured them as sort of arcane looking but real. :\
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jun 16, 04:24:57
Going to be adding a new character to the list very soon. :3
I'm going to introduce him in RP when I get the chance.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Tag360 on 2012 Jun 21, 11:36:30
Bumping the post.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jun 24, 10:22:16
Added Zappy the Changeling to the list of my OCs with bio.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Princess_Luna on 2012 Jul 15, 02:12:23
i like the idea of Cosmos... seems like a nice pony
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jul 15, 02:14:06
He is! I just hardly find chances to use him. He's VERY OP, ton of things about him I have not posted about.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Fluffy Cloud on 2012 Jul 22, 22:32:40
I don't know why I didn't comment on this before! I like you OCs! Just too lazy to make a "This is 100% Fluffy Coud approved."
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jul 23, 12:20:39
Thanks Fluffy Cloud! ^-^

Added Patchwork to the list of OCs
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 23, 12:26:49
Really good OC'S i liked them all :D, i love your style of drawing their eyes they look so nice :3
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Blues-Music on 2012 Jul 23, 12:33:42
Quote from: Tag360 on 2012 Jun 21, 11:36:30
Bumping the post.
What?I don't think you can post bumping the post just to post.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jul 23, 12:38:36
Quote from: julian on 2012 Jul 23, 12:26:49
Really good OC'S i liked them all :D, i love your style of drawing their eyes they look so nice :3



Well the only one here I can take credit for creating is Zappy. All the other drawings are by other artists. I should probably have it say who drew which picture. But thanks for the complements!
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 23, 12:45:24
Aw oops,. . . X3
still the character's are really good they all have great personalities :D
i can't wait to see you in a roleplay :3

Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Jul 23, 12:52:42
I'm in plenty of RPs. I'm thinking of opening my own jump in again, it worked well but then I discovered how to kill it in one day. x3
Don't try to do to a short "mini" plot kids, it won't be as speedy as you think it will be. :I
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: julian on 2012 Jul 23, 12:57:33
i see i just saw there are forums roleplays.. i think i should explore all about the forums before posting things  >.<
I was meaning about when the game is released it will be so fun to roleplay :D
and yes i see about jump-in roleplays and all, im kinda newbie about roleplay  :I
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Princess_Luna on 2012 Aug 04, 12:46:13
if teal likes being helpfull then maybe he could join THC (The Helpers Clan)  :D  http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=3865.0 (http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=3865.0)  :3
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Fruitcakethepony~ on 2012 Oct 08, 18:33:49
Awesome O.C'S! i have 3 pony O.C's X3 [glow=red,2,300]HeHe[/glow]


Spoiler: show
I think your main O.C is epic :3



FruitCake~
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Oct 11, 11:12:58
Quote from: Fruitcakethepony~ on 2012 Oct 08, 18:33:49
Awesome O.C'S! i have 3 pony O.C's X3 [glow=red,2,300]HeHe[/glow]


Spoiler: show
I think your main O.C is epic :3



FruitCake~


Thank you!
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2012 Dec 07, 14:42:57
What about Silver Ring? What does she look like?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 07, 17:42:07
Quote from: Yellowpikmin476 on 2012 Dec 07, 14:42:57
What about Silver Ring? What does she look like?

I um....never had a picture of Silver Ring. :c
Only a picture of the ring.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Jenzy on 2012 Dec 07, 22:40:55
When I started the Library RP, I wondered who Silver Ring was...

I checked here to find out she's "non-existent." :o


I usually check the OC page for OC info. And stuffs...
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: VanguardSquared on 2012 Dec 10, 06:35:28
Well since that "Spell has been cast in the library thread maybe someone can either use a pony generator or Draw Silver Ring you described her as being Brown with a dark brown mane and Tail?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 10, 09:43:58
No that's actually Zappy's original pony transformation without the ring. He can't transform as of now without the ring because his magic hurts him. But I should make an image of Silver Ring.

EDIT: I have created and added an image of Silver Ring. It's probably not final and is high subject to change.

Spoiler: Here's the image if your too lazy to go the first page. • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/SilverRing.png)
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: VanguardSquared on 2012 Dec 10, 13:08:04
I like it it's cute and kinda what i expected. and who knows if the spell works well maybe zappy can completely become part of the community and get a cutie mark(you can tell how excited i am (I don't really like the term cutie mark vanguard usually will say things like talent symbol or something like that to avoid the term.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 10, 15:06:09
Sorry to dash your hopes there, but I don't intend on turning Zappy into a pony permanently. He's my Changeling OC.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2012 Dec 10, 15:12:36
 O: I saw that ring in an RP and on Zappy's bio, and I thought there were either two rings, or one, but SR took it from ZtC, but now you finally explained that Silver Ring IS Zappy! Okay.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: VanguardSquared on 2012 Dec 10, 15:15:30
Maybe over time with the transformation Zappy can 'Make up' a mark or i can do something special for zappy. how about we do something special with zappy He is different from other changelings.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 10, 15:16:24
That's fine, and I'm sure Zappy will become a real pony only on occasion.
But to become one permenently, nah uh, not gonna happen.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2012 Dec 10, 15:24:03
But maybe he CAN still get a cutie mark that only appears in SR form?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 10, 15:26:55
He could. SR's talent....I have NO idea. x3
Honestly, no freakin clue as to what her talent could be.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2012 Dec 10, 15:33:44
Quote from: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 10, 15:26:55
He could. SR's talent....I have NO idea. x3
Honestly, no freakin clue as to what her talent could be.
You'll figure it out eventually. Know how long it took to come up with Yellow's talent? And see how cool it is now?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 10, 15:41:59
2 weeks?

EDIT: Zappy's age has been changed to at least somewhat resemble show date.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Jenzy on 2012 Dec 11, 02:53:08
I better make Jenzy's backstory ASAP!

And... Doesn't Zappy live in my house now? +Does Jenzy bring Zappy back to the school, ever?

Or still being worked out by the mares? :s

((Hmmm... I don't think of having Zappy permanently a pony either. Especially a filly. He's that cool cute changeling ^-^

Interesting non-alicorn Silver Ring. Makes sense. Changelings can become Unicorn OR Pegasi.

She looks pretty neat as Silver.))
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2012 Dec 11, 16:48:34
Thanks. I do imagine Zappy going back to school, and yeah I need to edit Zappy's little bio to be up to date.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2012 Dec 22, 12:21:21
You have extremely in-depth OCs, with backstories, you have every little ability down on there, and I just think, are your OC files really long, or are mine really short? I don't think I could ever come up with that much backstory for my OCs.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 10, 14:34:03
Added a new OC, Sanny! The 2 inch pegasus!

Bio is work in progress, I promise little to no cliches with the backstory!

Also, I want to ask if anyone thinks her wings should be more like butterfly wings or stay pegasus wings. Thoughts?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Rad Thunder on 2013 Jan 10, 14:37:29
Why 2 inches?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 10, 14:40:57
2 inches is close to the size of your index finger, assuming you're 15 years of age or older. Imagine a bug the size of your index finger.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Rad Thunder on 2013 Jan 10, 14:41:37
I know how big that is, but still...why a 2 inch pegasus?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 10, 14:43:25
I kinda wanted an OC that's small since Sammy the cupcake sized pony.

Oh wow, I should change Sanny's name. :I
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Rad Thunder on 2013 Jan 10, 14:45:37
Ok then. I won't pry more. :P
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 10, 17:12:38
Quote from: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 10, 16:28:52
Spoiler: Test Bio for Sanny V1. • show
Sanny herself has no idea how she came to be or why. Little does she know that that's exactly what she had wanted.
Before she came to be small, she was a normal pegasus that lived in a whole other universe, an alternate world of Equestria. In this alternate world, ponies and dragons lived together, dragons being more dominant than ponies. They still lived peacefully, with some disputes here and there. Specific mental illnesses ran rampant however, spreading like wildfire through the nation. Sanny's friends and big sister as well as her father contracted mental illnesses that sent them to asylums for life. All the other children her age were all terrified of getting sick and so were adults. As all this panic spread, some of the children had taken to blaming Sanny for these sicknesses, being that she never did enjoy playing with the other kids but instead enjoyed being alone with butterflies. Some others noticed the butterfly migration which passed over some towns had happened just as the illnesses were spreading and came to blame Sanny too.
Sanny was devastated and terrified of all the accusations. One night, in her room, she gazed up at the stars and wished to go away from all this, to be taken away to live with the butterflies and forget this world so she could live happily. After she did went to sleep and awoke in a forest with no memory but of her name.


So, thoughts? Good or bad? Anything that should be changed?
Is it too grim dark background?
EDIT
No complaints? Really? I suppose this is Sanny's bio then!


Sanny the two inch pegasus, completed with bio! :D
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Jan 11, 11:57:46
Wow. A lot sure has happened to San.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 11, 12:36:33
You are the first person to say anything about Sanny's bio.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Jan 11, 12:39:40
...
That's a good thing, right?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Jan 11, 13:07:57
Sort of. x3
I asked if anyone thought it was good or bad but no one said anything.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Jenzy on 2013 Mar 15, 21:50:20
Hmmm, will that snake character of yours have a bio? :s
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Mar 21, 21:45:26
Not sure Jenzy, not like the snake has a bio. She's lived a week long.

Updated Teal, new image of the Element of Love!
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Jun 05, 19:46:57
Sanny wouldn't like Rain.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Jul 11, 14:52:25
When was the last time someone looked in here?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Aug 17, 16:21:40
Added a new OC, Clarity! The invisible unicorn!

Post Merge

Deleted Sanny, the 2 inch Pegasus.
She was just not fun to play and pretty much useless.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Zedd on 2013 Aug 19, 20:56:48
By the way, are we assuming that Zappy as a changeling has different age patterns as regular ponies, as we can assume that the ponies in Equestria age at a human rate and wouldn't be as capable of their powers as Zappy has shown. Also, looking at the ages of ponies in Applebloom's class, we'd assume that they'd be around 6-11 years old, give or take. Even if you convert a regular horse's lifespan (in our world), he'd only be the equivalent of a four or five-year-old, placing him probably a bit young to be in the basic school like what Applebloom is in. Evidence suggests throughout the show (correct me if I'm wrong for my sources are just what I've noticed by watching the 3 seasons, along with seeing EG) that the majority of ponies age at a human rate in Equestria.

Sorry to be so hypercritical, I'm just wondering what the thought process is on Zappy's age. I like your OCs though, very creative. They clearly show depth and are very original.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GlassMirror on 2013 Aug 19, 21:25:27
(http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/e/w/eweplz.png?6)
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Aug 21, 10:30:13
Where's Vick?
Title: Re: Teal Turken\'s OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 11, 17:05:04
Okay so also deleted the invisible unicorn....I forgot I even had that character. :\
I've added a new character which is much easier to work with and doesn't feel like she has any cheap "conditions" to make her seem more special.

Quote from: Zedd on 2013 Aug 19, 20:56:48
By the way, are we assuming that Zappy as a changeling has different age patterns as regular ponies, as we can assume that the ponies in Equestria age at a human rate and wouldn't be as capable of their powers as Zappy has shown. Also, looking at the ages of ponies in Applebloom's class, we'd assume that they'd be around 6-11 years old, give or take. Even if you convert a regular horse's lifespan (in our world), he'd only be the equivalent of a four or five-year-old, placing him probably a bit young to be in the basic school like what Applebloom is in. Evidence suggests throughout the show (correct me if I'm wrong for my sources are just what I've noticed by watching the 3 seasons, along with seeing EG) that the majority of ponies age at a human rate in Equestria.

Sorry to be so hypercritical, I'm just wondering what the thought process is on Zappy's age. I like your OCs though, very creative. They clearly show depth and are very original.

I might have to try answering this question another time, I'm honestly stumped trying to remember why I chose Zappy's age to be so...like that young.
Quote from: Yellowpikmin476 on 2013 Aug 21, 10:30:13
Where's Vick?

Vick is Vick McBread's character, not my own. We often RP privately because...well..I don't feel I can say on his behalf, but he basically has little access to the internet.
Also he's writing a fanfic, been writing it for a long time now and I've been helping him. ^-^

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Added a simple, short bio to Sparkling Forge. May add and/or change later.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 12:25:40
Okay, just for the heck of it I'm reposting Sanny the little pegasus's OC page only because I might use her again sometime.
She'll be the first of my "sub characters", who are just characters I'll use a little here and there around the place but won't be full use characters UNLESS I find myself using them a bunch.

Spoiler: Anyways Sanny the tiny pony page here. • show
Name: Sanny
Age: 14
Cutie Mark: None
Bio: None
Other: None (yet)
Spoiler: Appearance: Stands just 1 inch tall, usually has some dirt on her. (That's not what the brown spots on her are) • show
(http://i.imgur.com/UMGnvDF.png)
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Shadow Mare on 2013 Oct 29, 13:06:56
Why is she just an inch tall?
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Post by: GlassMirror on 2013 Oct 29, 16:14:34
cute!
could she be.... A donkey pony?
Spoiler: show
(http://l.rgbimg.com/cache1p6ElV/users/t/ta/tacluda/600/mEXgPia.jpg)
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Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 17:03:47
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Oct 29, 13:06:56
Why is she just an inch tall?

I think you asked this question the first time I posted her OC tab.
I haven't created a new bio for her yet but I thinking it has to do with magic tree sap...
Work in progress. Unless you're not asking on a bio standpoint.

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If you're wondering about her size as a choice of mine well:
~Tiny characters I find to be quite fun to play and a few other seem to think so as well.
~1 inch is about the length of an adult human's pinky finger. Take your pinky finger and stands it on the palm of your other hand you'll see just how big 1 inch is.
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Post by: GlassMirror on 2013 Oct 29, 17:59:39
Quote from: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 17:03:47
Quote from: Shadow Mare on 2013 Oct 29, 13:06:56
Why is she just an inch tall?

I think you asked this question the first time I posted her OC tab.
I haven't created a new bio for her yet but I thinking it has to do with magic tree sap...
Work in progress. Unless you're not asking on a bio standpoint.

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If you're wondering about her size as a choice of mine well:
~Tiny characters I find to be quite fun to play and a few other seem to think so as well.
~1 inch is about the length of an adult human's pinky finger. Take your pinky finger and stands it on the palm of your other hand you'll see just how big 1 inch is.

dang  O:
so basically she's like a pixie pony  :3
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 18:01:04
She's cute!
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:02:43
Yep. Basically a pixie pony.

And yes she is cute.

I'm thinking of redesigning her appearance. I don't hate it but it looks a little...too refined in the mane and tail. I might also do something with the eyes.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 18:08:50
Also, I like her because she could be the start of somethin' new.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:12:18
Quote from: Yellowpikmin476 on 2013 Oct 29, 18:08:50
Also, I like her because she could be the start of somethin' new.

You know I made this OC 8 months ago or something now. x3
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 18:14:14
I did know that, I just meant to say she's something nobody else here has done.
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Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:14:55
Thanks! X3
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 18:17:15
Yeah, I like your OCs because they're all exotic, but not weird like a lot are.
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Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:18:21
Thank you again. x3
Though I do have this trend with pegasi. :\
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 18:20:22
And I have lots of unicorns. Although pegasi are my favorite.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:24:00
Sanny might be changing to an earth pony, but we'll see. I'm reworking her appearance in two creators right now.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 18:31:20
Yeah, there was even a point when I thought of Rainstorm as an earth pony, but I realized it wouldn't work with his weather changing talent.

Also, I'm thinking of giving Flower a new name...
Title: Re: Teal Turken\\\\\\\'s OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:38:19
I have two models, one is on the Hub's pony creator but it's not yet finished. I'll have it up in a few minutes.
Here's the generalzoi remodel of Sanny that I like. I could just add wings if anyone thinks she should stay a pegasus.
(http://i.imgur.com/UMGnvDF.png)

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Alright and here's the Hub Pony creator rework. Some of the stuff on there was very neat but I didn't use any of the clothing items and the mane styles were the only part that truely failed me besides the eyes.
(http://i.imgur.com/5lsVeqU.png)

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So who thinks one of these is better than the other?

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By the way. I had a background idea but it'll only work if someone else wants to do it.
The idea comes from my changeling RP from Omega in which her royal character has a changeling that was shrunk to serve as a personal assistant. I was thinking Sanny's background could be similar, with differences of course. The only problem is that she would need somepony to be the assistant of.
Anyone want to get in on that idea or scrap that background choice?
It's just an idea.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 19:01:56
Bottom.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 19:03:43
You like the hub creator version more? Do you like it more than the original design?
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/Tinypony.png)
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 19:11:18
Yeah, in my opinion,  the eyes on the original look odd to me.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 19:13:30
Is that the whole deciding factor for you?
I mean...I could just change the eyes but I thought big beady pink eyes would've been cute or something. :\
Personally I'm liking the new generalzoi pony creator model.
Title: Re: Teal Turken\'s OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 19:16:34
No, it wasn't the whole deciding factor, it just looked odd to me. But they're both better than the first.

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Quote from: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 18:38:19
I have two models, one is on the Hub's pony creator but it's not yet finished. I'll have it up in a few minutes.
Here's the generalzoi remodel of Sanny that I like. I could just add wings if anyone thinks she should stay a pegasus.
(http://i.imgur.com/UMGnvDF.png)

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Alright and here's the Hub Pony creator rework. Some of the stuff on there was very neat but I didn't use any of the clothing items and the mane styles were the only part that truely failed me besides the eyes.
(http://i.imgur.com/5lsVeqU.png)

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So who thinks one of these is better than the other?

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By the way. I had a background idea but it'll only work if someone else wants to do it.
The idea comes from my changeling RP from Omega in which her royal character has a changeling that was shrunk to serve as a personal assistant. I was thinking Sanny's background could be similar, with differences of course. The only problem is that she would need somepony to be the assistant of.
Anyone want to get in on that idea or scrap that background choice?
It's just an idea.
Well, looking at the eyes again, it does actually look pretty cute.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 19:23:03
I think I'll use the pony creator rework.
I might add wings to her.
Did you see my suggestion from before for her backstory?
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 19:26:00
I do think it's good. It's an interesting one. I like it.
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Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Oct 29, 19:27:34
Quote from: Yellowpikmin476 on 2013 Oct 29, 19:26:00
I do think it's good. It's an interesting one. I like it.

Alright, I'll wait to see if anyone takes interest in the idea.
For now I'm going to play some more Gmod.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Oct 29, 19:29:30
Alright. Sounds good.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Nov 04, 14:02:55
I've gotten a little inspiration to make a new changeling OC which is a rip out of my changeling RP.

Spoiler: Shallow Heart the pony loving changeling nurse! • show
General Information
Name-Shallow Heart
Race-Changeling
Age-23
Height-3 feet 8 inches
Likes-Ponies, most fluffy animals, power
Dislikes-Hedgehogs, ice cream, cake, claustrophobic
Personality-Sweet, easily insulted
Other-Shallow Heart has a talent in healing magics, most of which are changeling created but she knows one basic healing spell to use on ponies. She uses more common means of healing ponies like medicine and potions if she has any.
Spoiler: Appearance • show
(http://i1161.photobucket.com/albums/q517/Turkenq79/Ponies/ShallowHeart_zps78d917a6.png)
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: GoldenTerrabyte on 2013 Nov 04, 14:16:00
She's a cool one.
Title: Re: Teal Turken\'s OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Nov 04, 14:17:18
I forgot to add her image in before. I just added it. x3

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Added a copy of Shallow Heart's tab to the front page.
Also found a mistake in which Sparkling Forge's tab and Patchwork's tab were inside Zappy's tab. Tabs are now separated properly.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Dec 02, 02:05:32
-Changes made-


Planning a rebuild of Sheeby.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Shadow Mare on 2013 Dec 02, 09:04:57
ok
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Teal Turken on 2013 Dec 04, 15:40:34
Replaced the Pony Creator image of Shallow Heart to Ramisha's drawing of her.
Title: Re: Teal Turken's OCs!
Post by: Nightshade Star on 2015 May 03, 14:32:27
The Alicorn in the Night Ponies is like my OC.