OC - WinterSoul (Old Work - Never Finished) Still fun

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2012 Oct 01, 20:21:11 Last Edit: 2012 Oct 01, 20:23:59 by Lyra Heartstrings
Name: WinterSoul
Eye: darkorchid
Coat: White to Air superiority blue
Mane: International Klein Blue & Cerulean & Double Silver Stripes
Height: Smaller then Luna, but slightly larger then a normal pony build.
Build: Average Alicorn Build
Race: Alicorn
CutieMark: None (Gains the cutie mark: Hope At the end of the story)

Personality: Winter soul is the frail alicorn princess - Winter soul from birth was born with a frail weak body and wasn't ever able to do much, she was always cursed to be stuck inside unable to visit or play with anyone, never able to make friends, in fear of her health they kept her hidden from the world.  However, she was a strong pony at heart no matter what happened in her life, no matter how alone she really felt she always tried her best and hoped for a better and brighter tomorrow, however she was never really sure just exactly how to do things so often messed up, unintentionally making things worse.  She is a soft hearted pony with a caring spirit, always keeping to herself and never asking another pony for a helping hoof, always just to scared and fearful of bother others feeling that she isn't worth helping.  WinterSoul had many of social fears, she had never met anyone outside of her castle room, she has no idea how to interact with other ponies, she would always thought to herself that nopony would ever want to be her friend.  Growing up in a castle in all though, wintersoul was very inadept at the commons of royal life despite her obvious social fears, when in specific situations she would know how to act, so not to dissapoint or shame her family. 

Dark Side: Wintersoul's Possessed side is under impressionism under the curse of luna's pet.  Her main and coat is simply faded green and blue, with yellow eyes.  After being lonely for so many years, this poor alicorn was tricked and deceived by lunas pet and accepted her agreement to let her possess her at first, things went well for the young mare and she was once again able to walk and see the world outside.  Little did she know though, she was slowly being taken over by the pet, as things went on wintersoul became more and more deillusional, she was always under the impression she was doing the right thing, because thats how things looked in her eyes.  Even deceived her into the point of thinking she had fake friends, as the illusions and misbelieves got worse and worse the lonliness inside of wintersoul and her current happiness she always hoped for got all mixed up in her head, she became unable to tell the difference between right and wrong, and her misattempt to make everyone happy chaos brew.

Abilites:
Physical Ability: Wintersoul has very little physical ability, if anything she is only able to move her body for short periods of time for a short charge but after that she will be out.
Flying Ability: She is only able to use her wings to be able to give herself a short but semi-powerful charge at an enemy, or for a slow evasion.  Drains her strength fast.
Magical Ability: She has around the same magical abilties as twilight, however is unable to control much of any of them due to physical aspect magic would take out of her. 
Dark Physical Ability: Same as normal Earth Pony.  Note: When in dark stage, her body was being heavily damage despite how she felt and moved.
Dark Flying Ability: Same as a normal pegasus pony.  Note: When in dark stage, her body was being heavily damage despite how she felt and moved.
Dark Magical Ability:  When wintersoul had full control of her powers in her dark stage she was able to control great magic! She was never able to use such magic before, but always had great knowledge of spells, so weaving around high level spells was easy for her.  However her magical powers where still no wheres near that of luna's or celestia.

Special Ability: The ability to reject all forms of magical attacks, even those of the element of harmony. (Which is used on her in the story, she was brought back as sappy as it is by shearly the power of twilight and the others friendship and all the other ponies love.) Most from the royal family and wintersoul herself had known about her ability, but was kept secret from the rest of the pony world. 


Story:
Luna's Pet: Luna's pet is an original character i designed similair to celestial phoenix but was possessed in the same dark magic that nightmare moon was in, it wasn't banished when luna was sent to the moon instead it choose to go into a deep sleep intill luna had returned, it wished to rejoin its master and take revenge on ponyville.  But however was a tad bit late, by a few years.

Information:Made this a long time ago for a story, story was simple straight forward emotional, takes you into the character and then out as a simply pony falls prey a simple desire, to gain something more.  Bringing her into a whole new world of joy and happiness, as things just go slowly wrong being unable to fully realize the pain she is bringing others
Afterall i am not a writer, and makes for a touching thrilling tale.  Made it back in December when i first got into MLP, i never drew her though.  If anyone ever gets bored and wants to draw her though, much appreciated though. 
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