My OC Fuego, Comments would be appreciated.

[Fuego]

Not much is known about this young colts past,  as he was raised as an orphan rejected from equestrian society. He traveled the land ever since he first discovered his abilities, which have left him hated wherever he went. He is generally good-natured and is forgiving, but he still has trouble trying to control his emotions. He is generally fire-proof but there are a few exceptions to the matter.
I'm always seeking to improve his character description so I would appreciate some feedback if you read this! =)

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He is a Pegasus with flame manipulation abilities, not derived from magic, as they are more elemental attuned.
Not an Alicorn.

[Blues-Music]

Let me guess its another dark story adopted alicorn/unicorn with black/white color schemes.Seriouslly how much of those exist?

[Coffee Rush]

You should add a picture from Zoi's Pony Creator, or anything else as a reference.
http://generalzoi.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-Full-Version-254295904

[ShadowHeart]

Blues, really, back off! There is nothing wrong with this oc. The past and color scheme is fine! That's their choice. On the other hand, i would like to know about his powers cuz they can't be too strong.

[Fuego]

Well, he can manipulate/control most fire, but there is a drawback to it, as it the bigger the flames he uses, the more strength it drains. He can exhaust himself to such a point where he will pass out and not wake up for days! Also because of this ability he can't eat normal pony food at all, and must eat Obsidian that lies in the bottom of Active Volcanoes. He is resistant enough to be in lava to get the obsidian, but he still needs to breathe.
Hope this clarifies his powers a bit more.
BTW. I can't really explain his personality, I'm much better at showing you along the way in an rp.

[ShadowHeart]

awesome and balanced

[Jade Mask 114]

 

[Tiger]

Critiquing in the way Magus does is fun.

Not much is known about this young colts past,  as he was raised as an orphan rejected from equestrian society.

Why does controlling fire make him rejected from equestrian society?

He traveled the land ever since he first discovered his abilities, which have left him hated wherever he went.
He is generally good-natured and is forgiving, but he still has trouble trying to control his emotions.

I like this part. This very part quite balances out other things.

He is generally fire-proof

How?

but there are a few exceptions to the matter.
I'm always seeking to improve his character description so I would appreciate some feedback if you read this! =)

To see his picture right click and open in a new tab.

Wait... He's a guy, right? Why does he have eyelashes in the picture?
Error much?
It would've been nice if his eye colour wasn't red. The same colour in everything just makes it look... Monotone.

He is a Pegasus with flame manipulation abilities, not derived from magic, as they are more elemental attuned.

I don't get it. How does a pegasus do that?

Not an Alicorn.

Yay!

Well, he can manipulate/control most fire, but there is a drawback to it, as it the bigger the flames he uses, the more strength it drains. He can exhaust himself to such a point where he will pass out and not wake up for days!

Yes, I like this! Powerful, but not overpowered. Nicely balanced!

Also because of this ability he can't eat normal pony food at all, and must eat Obsidian that lies in the bottom of Active Volcanoes. He is resistant enough to be in lava to get the obsidian, but he still needs to breathe.

Still don't quite get how he's resistant to fire/lava. At least he can't breathe in lava. Good balance there.

Hope this clarifies his powers a bit more.
BTW. I can't really explain his personality, I'm much better at showing you along the way in an rp.

I'll be looking forward to seeing that personality!

Overall it's quite a nicely balanced OC. But I still want to know how he is fire-proof. Maybe you could explain that? 

[Fuego]

Well, as he grew so did his powers, unfortunately, his power flares up with his emotions, so as he grew he's been learning to control them. But since he grew up very isolated he's never really dealt with any-pony else, and this makes him stick out in most crowds. A lot of things got burned down because of this, as most bullies thought Fuego was their next victim.
In response to the fire-proof bit, you know how phoenixes have feathers coated in enzymes? The same enzyme is produced in his mane, which allows to him to be fire-proof.
As for the controlling fire bit, I leave that up to interpretation, it makes him more flexible as a character and allows him to be played in multiple threads.
About the eyelashes, woops that's my fault, I was in a rush.
His eyes were originally meant to be a light orange, but I ran out of time, I can edit his picture for this later.
So I hope this answers your questions. ^_^

[Tiger]

Ah... That explains everything! Well balanced!