Sahara Special (Positive feedback PLEASE! )

[Anibell April Dash]

Gender: mare

Looks: (still thinking, need ideas!)

Race: Pegasi

back story: Sahara was born in a desert very far from ponyville. She disliked it, she couldnt grow anything
anything there.She got permission to leave her family and took her belongings.
She traveled from there until she reached Appleloosa, she got instructions of a place
named "Ponyville" a place where she could settle a home and find out who she was really ment to be. She wanted to study to teach other fillies
everything she knew and what they dont know. She got her cutie mark, a shooting star.
Although she might be a pegasus, she dosent brag about. She teaches the meaning of
"Special".

[Midnight Breeze]

First, you really ought to stop creating new OCs every other day. Work on the quality of an OC before posting here and create a well developed character, rather than posting an incomplete character and then scrapping him or her.

The fact that she lives in the Ponyville library is rather puzzling. A loner like Twilight decided to take in a roommate out of nowhere? Even more puzzling being the fact that Twilight isn't even mentioned.

Also, why would she brag about being a pegasus? All three races are viewed as equals in Equestria.

And the last line really begs a question: What exactly is the meaning of 'special' you're talking about?

[Anibell April Dash]

First, you really ought to stop creating new OCs every other day. Work on the quality of an OC before posting here and create a well developed character, rather than posting an incomplete character and then scrapping him or her.

The fact that she lives in the Ponyville library is rather puzzling. A loner like Twilight decided to take in a roommate out of nowhere? Even more puzzling being the fact that Twilight isn't even mentioned.

Also, why would she brag about being a pegasus? All three races are viewed as equals in Equestria.

And the last line really begs a question: What exactly is the meaning of 'special' you're talking about?

Well what you said is VERY offensive, i really do not SCRAP a character, and this character is based of how people see me, a girl who
is special in her own way, even if she is annoying

and she dosent live in twilights library silly, she lives in a different one, she made herself! But alright picky pants since thats what u want ill remove it, and no i dont forget about my characters, and i wont stop making characters everyday, the more characters, the less time i get bored waiting for the game to come out, making ocs is what entertains me, the way you never know what will happen next! And by the way, i worked hard on this character, more than i wouldve ever written on a piece of paper in my house. So if you dont like my character, next time READ the title before giving NEGATIVE feedback?


(sorry for flipping out on u, but this character ment a lot to me )

[Sponk]

First, you really ought to stop creating new OCs every other day. Work on the quality of an OC before posting here and create a well developed character, rather than posting an incomplete character and then scrapping him or her.

The fact that she lives in the Ponyville library is rather puzzling. A loner like Twilight decided to take in a roommate out of nowhere? Even more puzzling being the fact that Twilight isn't even mentioned.

Also, why would she brag about being a pegasus? All three races are viewed as equals in Equestria.

And the last line really begs a question: What exactly is the meaning of 'special' you're talking about?

Well what you said is VERY offensive, i really do not SCRAP a character, and this character is based of how people see me, a girl who
is special in her own way, even if she is annoying

and she dosent live in twilights library silly, she lives in a different one, she made herself! But alright picky pants since thats what u want ill remove it, and no i dont forget about my characters, and i wont stop making characters everyday, the more characters, the less time i get bored waiting for the game to come out, making ocs is what entertains me, the way you never know what will happen next! And by the way, i worked hard on this character, more than i wouldve ever written on a piece of paper in my house. So if you dont like my character, next time READ the title before giving NEGATIVE feedback?


(sorry for flipping out on u, but this character ment a lot to me )

Excuse me, but he posted when it said ''Feedback please!''

Sorry, just had to point that out.

[Anibell April Dash]

First, you really ought to stop creating new OCs every other day. Work on the quality of an OC before posting here and create a well developed character, rather than posting an incomplete character and then scrapping him or her.

The fact that she lives in the Ponyville library is rather puzzling. A loner like Twilight decided to take in a roommate out of nowhere? Even more puzzling being the fact that Twilight isn't even mentioned.

Also, why would she brag about being a pegasus? All three races are viewed as equals in Equestria.

And the last line really begs a question: What exactly is the meaning of 'special' you're talking about?

Well what you said is VERY offensive, i really do not SCRAP a character, and this character is based of how people see me, a girl who
is special in her own way, even if she is annoying

and she dosent live in twilights library silly, she lives in a different one, she made herself! But alright picky pants since thats what u want ill remove it, and no i dont forget about my characters, and i wont stop making characters everyday, the more characters, the less time i get bored waiting for the game to come out, making ocs is what entertains me, the way you never know what will happen next! And by the way, i worked hard on this character, more than i wouldve ever written on a piece of paper in my house. So if you dont like my character, next time READ the title before giving NEGATIVE feedback?


(sorry for flipping out on u, but this character ment a lot to me )

Excuse me, but he posted when it said ''Feedback please!''

Sorry, just had to point that out.

I never knew bringing a new oc would cause this much trouble....the day i want somethin good i get the bad

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