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Quote from: Sponk on 2012 Oct 25, 22:43:19I never knew bringing a new oc would cause this much trouble....the day i want somethin good i get the badQuote from: Anibell April Dash on 2012 Oct 25, 22:27:58Excuse me, but he posted when it said ''Feedback please!''Quote from: Midnight Breeze on 2012 Oct 25, 20:50:02Well what you said is VERY offensive, i really do not SCRAP a character, and this character is based of how people see me, a girl who
First, you really ought to stop creating new OCs every other day. Work on the quality of an OC before posting here and create a well developed character, rather than posting an incomplete character and then scrapping him or her.
The fact that she lives in the Ponyville library is rather puzzling. A loner like Twilight decided to take in a roommate out of nowhere? Even more puzzling being the fact that Twilight isn't even mentioned.
Also, why would she brag about being a pegasus? All three races are viewed as equals in Equestria.
And the last line really begs a question: What exactly is the meaning of 'special' you're talking about?
is special in her own way, even if she is annoying
and she dosent live in twilights library silly, she lives in a different one, she made herself! But alright picky pants since thats what u want ill remove it, and no i dont forget about my characters, and i wont stop making characters everyday, the more characters, the less time i get bored waiting for the game to come out, making ocs is what entertains me, the way you never know what will happen next! And by the way, i worked hard on this character, more than i wouldve ever written on a piece of paper in my house. So if you dont like my character, next time READ the title before giving NEGATIVE feedback?
(sorry for flipping out on u, but this character ment a lot to me )
Sorry, just had to point that out.
Quote from: Midnight Breeze on 2012 Oct 25, 20:50:02Well what you said is VERY offensive, i really do not SCRAP a character, and this character is based of how people see me, a girl who
First, you really ought to stop creating new OCs every other day. Work on the quality of an OC before posting here and create a well developed character, rather than posting an incomplete character and then scrapping him or her.
The fact that she lives in the Ponyville library is rather puzzling. A loner like Twilight decided to take in a roommate out of nowhere? Even more puzzling being the fact that Twilight isn't even mentioned.
Also, why would she brag about being a pegasus? All three races are viewed as equals in Equestria.
And the last line really begs a question: What exactly is the meaning of 'special' you're talking about?
Quote from: Blues-Music on 2012 Oct 24, 01:18:01theres a wonderbolt named Surprise (check wiki for all wonder bolts, theres one named surprise) and..nah, whatevs not changing my oc
I'm sorry starsong I need to see your OC somehow.Do you have a link to its thread?
Starfruit Delight Surprise:Since this pony isn't a fighting class it can not be called Mary sue until it has over powered abilities.Deciding is actually good.I also didn't understand the last sentence.Did you mean to say surprise which is pinkies old form teach you that , or do you mean the wonderbolts tought you?Either way that is the only O.P thing here which is that you managed to get the wonderbolts to train you even though Rainbowdash can't get them to do that.
Lvl:2.3.Its good in all , but the backstory.Yes a backstory can make a pony a mary sue.You just need to make one tweak in your story.You don't have to make it more normal you can keep the same idea , but just change the character.