Papyrus Scroll. Needs help critiques welcome.

[alexandas]

Name: Papyrus Scroll
Nicknames: ((none somepony make one))
Age: Filly, 5-ish
Residence: Spellsworth's library
Species/Type/Race: Unicorn ((yeah because everypony hates allicorns and ruined my previous thread))
Personality: Kind, giving, loving, happy, gets annoyed easily, more
Art:

Spoiler: papyrus pictures • show

Spoiler: original vector by me • show

Talent: Anything to do with paper or origami
Cutie Mark: A piece of Spellsworth's scroll paper
Backstory: ((she's changed so she's not been made by magic))
Relations with other ponies: Spellsworth = A dad like pony, sometimes more of a brother like pony, Cluoy = mother like pony sometimes a sister like friend, Skozam = friend
Quotes:
Fun facts: her hair is like paper

Of course: I accept any art, and post it here.  Also me like critiques!

But don't talk about how I ended up making her a unicorn like spells or i won't be too happy

[GoldenTerrabyte]

This is just an idea, but you can always put all your OCs on one page. I don't wish to criticize, but I'm just saying, people will notice them all a lot better if they're all on one page. You don't have to of course, I'm just throwing ideas around.

[alexandas]

I tried before i think people actually noticed them less, I'll think about it but im not sure

[GoldenTerrabyte]

However you do it is fine, it's just easier to find them all at once if they're one page. But these are yours, so do it how you like.

[alexandas]

i will

[GoldenTerrabyte]

Or you could at least link all of them in your sig instead of just one OC.

[alexandas]

ill think of something