OC creating help thread/OC Developing thread/OC critique thread.

Started by alexandas, 2013 Jan 04, 17:31:45

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alexandas

Are you trying to make an OC and you can't think of anything?, do you only have a sentence for your new OC?, or is your OC to OP and you don't know what to do about?

Well if any of those questions were answered with yes than I can help you.  Okay enough with this annoying commercial intro thing!  Anyway I have a great imagination and could easily make a pretty balanced and detailed OC without even trying, so I've decided that I'm gonna help anypony that needs help bring developed, I will only suggest things you can do unless you want me to make you an OC or something.  So just ask, I will also critique already developed OCs and help make them better.  I will also not look at your OC and decide it's OP without reading the description.  Even though everypony thinks an allicorn is overpowered and godly I could help you make one that's not.  So just ask I'm really happy to help all of my friends here on LoE!
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The Wandering Magus

hmm... all right, I'll try.  Could you critique every OC on my OC page, please?  Link in sig.
(sorry Bakasan, chose this image)
Descriptions and art of my OCs here: http://legendsofequestria.com/forum/index.php?topic=2636
my art: http://legendsofequestria.com/forum/index.php?topic=298
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alexandas

Maybe, yes i can but they aren't going to be like gracie's critiques, they are basically to see if your oc needs tweaking or not.

edit: why are they all spread out, that makes my life difficult!
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:ajshifty::-3 (bloomberg)

The Wandering Magus

I didn't make them all at the same time, and there's a 20k character limit for posts, I think.
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Descriptions and art of my OCs here: http://legendsofequestria.com/forum/index.php?topic=2636
my art: http://legendsofequestria.com/forum/index.php?topic=298
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alexandas

oh, i'll copy everything into a word document.  But don' expect me to critique a purposely mary sue pony, how many ponies do you have?
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:ajshifty::-3 (bloomberg)

The Wandering Magus

a lot, although I start to use the "mary sue" ponies in RPs where I'm not GMing because tbh they're not actually that OP, they're just OP for the situation I made them for.  Outside of that situation, say, in an adventure game or something, they'd be "normal".  Fancy and Bloodblade are examples of what I mean.  Wanderer is, of course, a Mary Sue, built for being Mary Sue in any situation.

I think in total, not counting Wanderer, I have 7 OCs, most with long backstories.
(sorry Bakasan, chose this image)
Descriptions and art of my OCs here: http://legendsofequestria.com/forum/index.php?topic=2636
my art: http://legendsofequestria.com/forum/index.php?topic=298
visiting soldier sister, be back 8/12/2013

alexandas

 :] and wanderer is probably a good pony so i critique him too.
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The Silent Wolf

How bout Wolf Petal, a link is in my siggy under "OC's"
If The Silent Wolf is to long, just call me Kake

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alexandas

okay, but please remember this isn't just for critiques.
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