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PlatinumJoystick

Joystick had taken his seat on the train, daydreaming to pass the time.
Hail to the Knights Of The Dawn.

annosrules

(Thought we were already there... oh well)
"Oops, that'll be the train. Better get on it," Blaze says, making a sudden dash onto the train.

indigoEruption

Miru couldn't help but bleat as he mad a mad dash...bounce? for it as well. He slid on in such a way, with so much spirit, that even a baseball player would be jealous! He could hear the umpire declare 'safe!' in his mind! He gets a little carried away and is just on the floor, crying while a train worker is nudging him out of the way for other passengers to get on.

FakeSmile

2015 Jun 16, 18:14:25 #45 Last Edit: 2015 Jun 16, 18:28:31 by FakeSmile
(( I thought the train already left. :ll ))
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PlatinumJoystick

Joystick viewed the scene from his seat. Well, that's... interesting, for lack of a better word. Joy thought, wondering what was going on with the pony.
Hail to the Knights Of The Dawn.

Naura

((Ops, deleted my comment, I'll re add it here, but we seem to have made this a little confusing))
Honey looked at the train and squeed.
"Ah, the train got here earlier than planned, great!" She picked up her little bag and skipped unto the train.
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PlatinumJoystick

((I suppose we were supposed to be waiting for the train, not disembarking it.
Hail to the Knights Of The Dawn.

Naura

((I liked the idea Julien had, let's go with that))
Honey sat down on a seat in second class and hoped that the other ponies would hurry up and get on the train.
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annosrules

Blaze sat himself down in the economy section. It was a little cramped, but the savings were worth I in Blaze's mind.

FakeSmile

The mare hummed a tune as she read over her notes. She would look up every once in a while to examine the land and see if it fit her plan. With a satisfied smile, the mare closed her note book and slid it back into her saddle back. She then slowly stood up as she gazed at the empty land. A big smiled formed on her face as she tool in the scenery. With a giggle, the mare turned and headed toward the lobby. After a short while of slow walking, Eleanor made it to the lobby. As she entered the center she examined the room. Not much was here to see expect another mare. Eleanor was a bit thrown off by that; she didn't remember seeing her get off the train. She then turned her gaze away from the mare and started to walk toward a little stand. With a small smile, the mare started to fumble through the pamphlets, hoping to find one about this mystery land.
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indigoEruption

Miru looked at Joystick, and Blazing. He wanted to sit by both of them, yes, but he didn't wanna be that restless child who would keep getting up. He's gonna. Sit by Blazing. And look over (back?) at Joystick. Those long ears are all up and listening to everything, all curious. Trains, man.

PlatinumJoystick

"Wonder when we officially depart," Joystick said to himself. I'm pretty sure everyone is on the train. Shouldn't be long. Don't know the exact time though.
Hail to the Knights Of The Dawn.

indigoEruption

Miru gets over excited and looses control of making controlled expressions. He becomes so excited his head looks like a realistic frog as he gazes at Joystick in wonder. Great.

Gracie Sky



Lucidity's ears shook subtley when the other pony entered the room, but she didn't move otherwise. She only continued staring out the window. However, when she heard the pony shuffling through those pamphlets, she just barely turned her head and glanced sideways.

"Those pamphlets are blank. I've already checked them." she said sternly. "This place isn't exactly a tourist attraction, so what are you doing here?"
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FakeSmile

Eleanor's ears twitch as the stranger spoke up. She moved her bangs out of her eyes to examine the pamphlet better. The mare let out a sigh at the sight of the blank pamphlets. As she let go of her bangs she softly said,
How strange, I was thinking the same question for you.
Though, I am sure you have your reasons. My
reason can not be explained just yet. Though...

Eleanor then turned toward the stranger. With a smile she continued,
I can tell you my name, it is Eleanor Smiles.
I would say its nice to meet you but I am
more surprised to meet you. When I got
off the train I did not see you. So I can
assume you either live or work here.
Of course, you could have been in a
different section of the train than me.
Oh, so many questions but so little time.
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Gracie Sky

Lucidity let out a sigh and closed her eyes briefly before rising from her spot and approaching Eleanor Smiles slowly. When she reached Eleanor, she opened her eyes to reveal a slightly menacing stare.

"I'm Lucidity, a top ranking student from Princess Luna's School for gifted Unicorns and I assure you I used a more convenient method to get here from Canterlot. I'm here on assignment to investigate this... strange place on behalf of the school. I'm also supposed to keep an eye out for suspicious individuals, which may include ponies who conceal their motives for coming to a place like this as though they were on vacation."
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Julien999

2015 Jun 18, 17:25:44 #58 Last Edit: 2015 Jun 19, 06:34:46 by Julien999
"A student from Princess Luna... Really interesting." Thought the Mysterious Pony just lie down outside of this "house".

FakeSmile

2015 Jun 18, 17:41:44 #59 Last Edit: 2015 Jun 18, 21:47:41 by FakeSmile
Eleanor smiled was still across her face. The mare had a killer stare, Eleanor will give her that, but she is a business mare. A little school filly isn't any where near as threatening as her father when he is in a business meeting. The mare just smiled as she said,
That is cute, you are sent on a little mission. Well, I
can assure you this is not a vacation. Like I said, I
can not explain the details of my business here.
If you like, you may follow me for a bit. I have to
examine the area, which I assume you will be doing
the same sooner or later.

Eleanor flashed a big smile before turning around. As she headed toward the exit she continued,
I wish you all my luck with your field trip Miss
Lucidity. Hopefully you will join me later on
my expedition. Good Bye Miss Lucidity!

The mare waved Lucidity with a smile before walking through the exit. Annoyed, Eleanor blew at her bangs to let out some steam. Every second wasted in the lobby put her plans back a few seconds. The mare then pulled out her note book with her mouth as she levitated out a pen. She then started to write down a few new notes as she waited to see if Lucidity would join her.
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