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annosrules

Remembering that he's on a schedule, Blaze jumps down off the train platform and begins walking into North Tailorina

indigoEruption

Ink's ears went up, quietly fretting to himself. He pulled himself up, and began to follow him. He didn't want to be alone, and he liked what this guy had to say. "Where are you going?" he asked, hesitation not even trying to hide at all in his voice. Socializing was never his strong point.

annosrules

"Everywhere, my patron's map isn't going to draw its self,"

indigoEruption

"Oh. Can I come with? I don't really remember why I came here, so it would be nice to walk with someone." He peeped, looking all hopeful at him. Yes, please let the fleece pone follow.

annosrules

"As long as you can keep up," Blaze says apathetically.

indigoEruption

"Of course I can keep up!" He warbled, feeling confident in his own abilities.

annosrules

"Good, because I have roughly a hundred miles to cover by midnight," Blaze says with a smirk.

indigoEruption

"I brought veggies." He commented, looking so confident that the veg will help him go that far. "So what are you going through here for? Around the world in 80 days?"

Naura

"Uhm, do you know where those are going?" Honey put down her "diary" and stared in the direction the two stallions were heading.
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annosrules

"Of course I know where I'm going, my bearing is North East twenty-five degrees, and I'm here to make a map for a wealthy patron, who shall remain nameless," Blaze replies arrogantly.

indigoEruption

"Do you have a compass on you, or in your head?" Gawked Miru, who was quite impressed with the haughty male. "Imma make a map too!" He bleated excitedly, maybe even wiggling a little. He wants to make a map for his mentor, yes!

annosrules

"Compass in my head? Well, I guess it's kind of like that, but completely different," Blaze says, not loosing his pace to the conversation.

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Nearby the train station was a lobby where passengers coming off the train could rest and gather travel information. Strangely enough, though, this lobby area was very empty. There was only one mare there, sitting down while stoically looking outside a window towards the town of North Tailorina. She had a pale orange skin tone and a grey mane that seemed to change to a lighter shade the farther down the hair it went. She didn't seem very enthusiastic about what she saw although it appeared as though she had been staring at the city for some time.

In fact, how long was she here for? What was her business here in the first place?
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Julien999

2015 Jun 15, 01:27:31 #33 Last Edit: 2015 Jun 16, 00:54:13 by Julien999
A mysterious stallion with a top hat, a cape and a rod was there, in the downfall of the North Tailorina, looking around the place. "If we didn't make a mistake... there should be ponies who meet here..."

indigoEruption

"Do you...Have that map thing in your head too?" Miru's eyes were all big like a kid meeting a super hero. If this guy says yet, he'd finally have someone to relate to with all this weird mind map  stuff! Little bounce in Miru's step.

annosrules

"Map in my head? Well, I guess you could call it that,"

FakeSmile

An overly dressed unicorn slowly walks off the first class session of the train. The unicorn was wearing an outfit as if she was about to go on a month expedition in the rain forest. A small smiled formed on her face as she examined the train platform. Once she heard about a train leading to new land she just had to jump on board. The mare waited by the train for somepony to bring her her suitcase. As she waited, the mare pulled out a little notebook from her saddle bag. She started to mumble to her self as she went over what she had planned for this little trip.
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Julien999

"Well... We come a little bit too earlier... we will going to explore a little bit what there was around here and come back." The mysterious pony vanished, like if nothing happened there.

FakeSmile

(( The train has already
arrived at North Tailorina  ^-^ ))

After a few minutes of mumbling to her self, an earth pony brought the mare her suitcase. She smiled warmly as she tucked away her notebook. As she thanked the pony she gave him a rather big tip. She grabbed her suitcase and walked off the platform before the pony could protest. As she stepped off the platform she let out a big sigh of joy. Looking at the endless sea of empty land made her smile grow bigger and bigger. But before her plan can start, she needed to see what this land has to offer. The mare set her suitcase down as she slowly sat down on the platform. Humming a tune, the mare pulled out the notebook again to go over what she planned on doing here for this month.
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Nightshade Star

Airy leaped on the train, feeling excited that the train has finally come. She trot in the 1st class session and next to Honey.

Finally! It came! She thought. She was definitely excited.


                                                                Definitely.

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