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Started by Crystal Chaos, 2012 Jun 08, 22:27:53

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Crystal Chaos

2012 Jun 08, 22:27:53 Last Edit: 2014 Jul 28, 19:02:58 by Electro-BLITZ
So I'm writing a song for the Asylum herd, and I got
Spoiler: This far • show
This place is insane,
I swear it's affecting my brain.
Eyes flick to the floor,
My mind won't work no more!

My judgement is blurred
But they say join in on the herd.
Will they break me out?
I just wanna shout!


Now think, pony, think
You are on the brink!
You are about to crash,
Don't do anything too rash!

Pull on these chains.
They bind me to such pain.
Trying to block out the evil things
You open your mouth and sing...


My mind stopped working at the chorus come to mind. If anypony can give any ideas, it would be much appreciated.

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Tiger

I don't know why, but I just keep thinking of this as the chorus:

I don't wanna fear no more!
I will put you right on the floor!
I will not give in to you!
So you better watch out, you  WILL become poo!


...ovO
I'm not quite understanding it though, is it about trying to block out the evil things of the Asylum herd or what?

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hyper drive [HD]

2012 Jun 09, 20:49:13 #2 Last Edit: 2012 Jun 10, 01:30:14 by hyper drive [HD]
i dont know where to go,
im working for there show,
but the thought of this herd,
makes me feel like a bird,

the one thing bringing me down,
is the thought of leaving this town,
but the only thing wrong,
is singing this song,




Crystal Chaos

The story of the Asylum herd is we are prisoners to some non-pony creatures. The prison makes us slowly go insane. Anyway, these are great ideas, thank guys. Even your's Tiger, but I may tweak it.   x3

CyanideInsanity

Can't help with lyrics, but my first though with you're idea was Welcome Home (sanitarium) by Metallica. Maybe more inspiration? Don't know, but thats all I can contribute, methinks.
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Tiger

Quote from: Crystal Chaos on 2012 Jun 09, 20:52:38
The story of the Asylum herd is we are prisoners to some non-pony creatures. The prison makes us slowly go insane. Anyway, these are great ideas, thank guys. Even your's Tiger, but I may tweak it.   x3

Why thank you  ^-^
It's nice to have a song for your herd. I'd like one for mine too, but I'm no good at composing music or making lyrics  x3

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