Tokyo's OCs

[Tokyo]

[glow=pink,2,300]Ok, this will be my OC thread, so here we go[/glow]

.First

Name: Grey Kiss a.k.a. Tokyo
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Age: 40
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Gender: Stallion
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Species: Unicorn [Horny Pony! ]
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Appearance:



Cutie Mark: [I'm still working on it ]
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Backstory: [Must finish it first ]
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Personality: He's shy and kind, both in an incredibly exaggerated level. He has a weak character, and a light and nice presence.
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Likes: Science and Technology, all kind of Magic, Chocolates, Coffee, Drawing, Writting, Studying, Support and Experiment at the Institute he works at, The Starlight Institute. He also likes all kind of nice places where he can be alone and work on every kind of stuff he likes, like being in the middle of a Victorian Garden, working on his spells.
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Dislikes: Being Interrupted, Loud Noises, Imperfect Things, Brutality and Abuse and every kind of Mean or Evil things.
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Special talent ((Ability)) : He can copy or take other ponies abilities and conditions by any kind of touch or kiss, saving them in his special book "Dreams of the Nameless Foals" .

How does it work? It works by a spell, created by him, which only works on him and no one more than him. He has to prepare a magical kiss or touch, then he must get in physical contact with other pony to kiss or touch her/him, taking or copying his ability or condition.
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Coltfriend/Marefriend: N/A
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Extras: N/A

[ShadowHeart]

I think the whole copy ability thing might be too much. It's like he can have all the talents in the world if he can get them. Also, a spell that can only be cast by one unicorn is only for princesses or royal magicians it would seem. I think it would be better for the spell the be castable by those who can cast it though it's extremely complex and only a select few unicorns are accomplished enough to do it. Also, since this spell seems really strong, you might want to make his other magical abilities weaker to balance him out

[Tokyo]

I think the whole copy ability thing might be too much. It's like he can have all the talents in the world if he can get them. Also, a spell that can only be cast by one unicorn is only for princesses or royal magicians it would seem. I think it would be better for the spell the be castable by those who can cast it though it's extremely complex and only a select few unicorns are accomplished enough to do it. Also, since this spell seems really strong, you might want to make his other magical abilities weaker to balance him out

[glow=pink,2,300]That will change soon, i'm still working on him[/glow] [glow=pink,2,300]I made him based on Chrollo Lucifer, from Hunter x Hunter[/glow] (An Anime ) [glow=pink,2,300]So don't worry[/glow]

[ShadowHeart]

ok. I have never seen that anime...

[Tokyo]

ok. I have never seen that anime...

[glow=pink,2,300]No problem[/glow] [glow=pink,2,300]Check out some facts or clips if you want, so you'll understand everything a bit better[/glow]

[Legion495]

Brohoof*   looks awesome.
But there is one thing that scares me 
This eyes are sooo empty.
All in one a good pic

[Tokyo]

[glow=pink,2,300]An empty pony deserves a good pair of empty eyes [/glow]

[White Prism]

[glow=darkgreen,2,300]As shadow appointed, the ability is too much

I look forward about what you will change and do

Depending on how you change the ability, I can say few ideas for the cutie mark, but it will be up to you, since is your OC and pony, just trying to help and not make him

Looking forward the backstory [/glow]

[Tokyo]

[glow=darkgreen,2,300]As shadow appointed, the ability is too much

I look forward about what you will change and do

Depending on how you change the ability, I can say few ideas for the cutie mark, but it will be up to you, since is your OC and pony, just trying to help and not make him

Looking forward the backstory [/glow]

[glow=pink,2,300]I know, i know But his ability will continue related to steal and take things from other ponies

By the way, i'm not sure if i'll be able to post his backstory here on the forums, because it's NSFW due to its high gore content...

And well... keep looking forward for more details [/glow]