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2013 May 03, 15:29:01 Last Edit: 2013 Jun 12, 01:57:36 by DR
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A Unicorn found a spell to vanish all evil.  Mara with her orb, Lassa with her orb, and DR with the white dragon scale to protect the others while Dark Rain transport them to a different time.


Name Keron - - DR
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Age 25
Gender Male
Race Pegasus
Looks
His Mane is black with red highlights. Body is black and red that look like a dragon hide. His right wing and left hoof are wrapped.
Cutiemark
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Like dragons, sleeping,
Dislike
Favorite Food Bunny stew,
Bio
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He likes dragons so he started to study them.  He waited for them to go to sleep to grab some scales and a little blood.  He met Mara and they fell in love.  One day he saw an orb so he grabbed it.  When the war started between the races he wanted to create a potion called the all cure.
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Name Mara
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Age 26
Gender Female
Race Pegasus
Looks
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Cutiemark
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Bio
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When she saw Keron for the first time she fell in love with him.
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Name - Dark Rain
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Age 24
Gender Male
Race Unicorn
Looks
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Cutiemark
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Bio
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He wanted to see the world.
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Name - Earth
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Age 33
Gender Male
Race Earth pony
Looks
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Cuiemark
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He like to joke around.
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Name Lassa Bones
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Age 40
Gender Female
Race Unicorn
Looks
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Cutiemark
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Like  Listening, Roses,  traveling.
Dislike  Fighting.
Favorite Food  Hay sandwiches,
Skill  The Elements,  and others.
Energy Medium.
Orb of Elements.
Bio
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She was going to get marred.

Story
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Lassa Bones was 33 years old when she meet Jock.  They were seeing each other for 2 years when Jock asked her to marry him.  Lassa said yes to his proposal.  On their wedding day Lassa found a black orb...........  When she woke up, she looked around not knowing where she was and why she was there. She did not know who she was either.  When the nurse came in the room, she saw that Lassa was awake and got the doctor and Jock.  The doctor checked on how she was doing.  Lassa looked over to Jock not knowing who he was.  Jock walked over to Lassa to see how she was doing.  He was shocked when the doctor said that she lost her memories.  Later that night Lassa got out of her bed and left the hospital.  When she got outside, she started to run.  A couple of days later, she saw missing posters on the wall. The poster had her picture on it and a name.  She looked at the poster.  She wondered if her name was Lassa.  Six months later, Lassa met an earth pony that called himself Earth.  They talked for awhile.  She told him that she did not remember anything.  Earth asked her if she wanted to come with him to see the world.  She said yes.  They traveled together from town to town.  One year passed before she started to remember who she was.  She told Earth that she needed to do something.  She went back to her home town.  She found Jock and said sorry.  They talked for awhile before she said the she like to travel.  He understood and wished her good luck and good health.  Lassa hugged and kissed Jock before leaving.  He looked down at the ring he had on.  Lassa and Earth started to travel again.  One day she asked Earth if that was his real name.  He said no.  That night she asked what is real name was.  He told her it was.....  They traveled together for two months before meeting DR, Mara, Shiny, and Dark Rain.
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Name - Shiny
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Age 10
Gender Female
Race Earth pony
looks
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Cutiemark
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Like nearly everything.
Dislike herting others and herself.
Favorite Food PP&J sandwich, pancakes,
Bio
She left her home. She found an orb on the road and picked it up.[/spoiler]

Tiger

When we create OCs, we go more for quality than quantity. What I'm looking at right now is like a family of background ponies having a picnic. We don't know what they do, their personality, their history, nothing. We just know what they look like and that they can talk. Expand more on them, add history and personality, their talent, cutie mark, etc. It's all about quality!

It's hard to fully develop many OCs. You might want to try reducing the number. Of course, at least 6 is better than 9.

A link to my tumblr above!
Tiger's OC page. Should re-do it...

Dark Hooves

this tempate will help you

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Name:
Species:
Wing power: (if applicable)
Mana Points: (if applicable)
Gender:
Age:
Coat color:
Mane and tail color:
Mane and tail shape:
Eye color:
Personality:
Positive traits:
Cutiemark:
Special talent:
B-day:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Favorite food:
Occupation:
Dream job:
Skills:
Hobbies:
Negative traits/limitations:

Story:


just click on the spoiler then copy and paste the template
<br /><br />everypony is capable of great good or great evil but everypony should be treated like their worth giving a chance<br /><br />My OCs. http://forum.legendsofequestria.com/index.php?topic=6860.0

DR

2013 May 04, 12:49:46 #3 Last Edit: 2013 May 14, 01:17:47 by DR
I will work on it more as I go on.

GoldenTerrabyte

I would like to get to know Earth.
I'm back

Asterian Starfall

Quote from: Dark Hooves on 2013 May 04, 07:31:11
this tempate will help you

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Name:
Species:
Wing power: (if applicable)
Mana Points: (if applicable)
Gender:
Age:
Coat color:
Mane and tail color:
Mane and tail shape:
Eye color:
Personality:
Positive traits:
Cutiemark:
Special talent:
B-day:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Favorite food:
Occupation:
Dream job:
Skills:
Hobbies:
Negative traits/limitations:

Story:


just click on the spoiler then copy and paste the template


Mana points... Is that even in Equestria, and how does one measure it?
"Luck is how you explain an overly-variabled scenario that went in your favor." - Asterian Élire Starfall

Tiger

Quote from: Asterian on 2013 Jun 06, 19:08:37
Quote from: Dark Hooves on 2013 May 04, 07:31:11
this tempate will help you

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Name:
Species:
Wing power: (if applicable)
Mana Points: (if applicable)
Gender:
Age:
Coat color:
Mane and tail color:
Mane and tail shape:
Eye color:
Personality:
Positive traits:
Cutiemark:
Special talent:
B-day:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Favorite food:
Occupation:
Dream job:
Skills:
Hobbies:
Negative traits/limitations:

Story:


just click on the spoiler then copy and paste the template


Mana points... Is that even in Equestria, and how does one measure it?

Ikr  o.O
Not everything in that list is required, just remember to put in the personality, likes, dislikes, fears, cutie mark, talent and backstory.

A link to my tumblr above!
Tiger's OC page. Should re-do it...

super_chris85

Quote from: Tiger on 2013 Jun 06, 19:43:52
Quote from: Asterian on 2013 Jun 06, 19:08:37
Quote from: Dark Hooves on 2013 May 04, 07:31:11
this tempate will help you

Spoiler: show
Name:
Species:
Wing power: (if applicable)
Mana Points: (if applicable)
Gender:
Age:
Coat color:
Mane and tail color:
Mane and tail shape:
Eye color:
Personality:
Positive traits:
Cutiemark:
Special talent:
B-day:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Favorite food:
Occupation:
Dream job:
Skills:
Hobbies:
Negative traits/limitations:

Story:


just click on the spoiler then copy and paste the template


Mana points... Is that even in Equestria, and how does one measure it?

Ikr  o.O
Not everything in that list is required, just remember to put in the personality, likes, dislikes, fears, cutie mark, talent and backstory.

of course their is mana points every unicorn has them. remember when Twi's horn goes red? that is because he used all her mana and had to recharge

Tiger

Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Jun 06, 20:22:38
remember when Twi's horn goes red?

May I ask which episode that was?

A link to my tumblr above!
Tiger's OC page. Should re-do it...

super_chris85

Quote from: Tiger on 2013 Jun 06, 20:58:00
Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Jun 06, 20:22:38
remember when Twi's horn goes red?

May I ask which episode that was?

Too many pinkie pies

Tiger

Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Jun 06, 21:02:05
Quote from: Tiger on 2013 Jun 06, 20:58:00
Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Jun 06, 20:22:38
remember when Twi's horn goes red?

May I ask which episode that was?

Too many pinkie pies

Ah, that. All the magic blasting had produced a lot heat, heating up her horn and causing it to turn red. There was even smoke coming out of it if I'm not mistaking. The red horn does not prove that mana points exist in Equestria.

A link to my tumblr above!
Tiger's OC page. Should re-do it...

GoldenTerrabyte

Not all magic is the same. It's not all powered by... "mana"?
I'm back

super_chris85

Quote from: Tiger on 2013 Jun 06, 21:21:50
Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Jun 06, 21:02:05
Quote from: Tiger on 2013 Jun 06, 20:58:00
Quote from: super_chris85 on 2013 Jun 06, 20:22:38
remember when Twi's horn goes red?

May I ask which episode that was?

Too many pinkie pies

Ah, that. All the magic blasting had produced a lot heat, heating up her horn and causing it to turn red. There was even smoke coming out of it if I'm not mistaking. The red horn does not prove that mana points exist in Equestria.

why does everypony gotta shoot me down when I say something that could or could not be right. i mean I know you are right but everpony is just like nooo

GoldenTerrabyte

Despite what I had said, it is an interesting and cool theory.
I'm back

Tiger

Quote from: Yellowpikmin476 on 2013 Jun 06, 21:39:57
Despite what I had said, it is an interesting and cool theory.

True at that.

A link to my tumblr above!
Tiger's OC page. Should re-do it...

sammym07

Are u guys ok..? XD

I can't turn this around
I keep running into walls that I can't break down
I said I just wander around
With my eyes wide shut because of you

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