Star

[StarTheAlicorn]

Name-Star
Gender-Mare
Species-Pegasus
Parents-????
Bestfriends-CommetFire,Jinx
Brother sister-MoonDust,LavenderShine
Cutie mark-5 pointed yellow star with smaller white stars surrounding the outside of it.
Personality
Star interests in astrology and the beauty of the night sky.
She often sits outside at night staring up at stars for hours.
She lives in an orphanage for as long as she can remember.
Star is very sensative and quiet rarely socalizing with other foals.
Only talks to her sisters and her best colt friend CommetFire.
Star says the Stars are her family and she feels comfort around them.
Despite her disability to fly due to her wings being born oddly deformed.
She one day dreams to fly to higher places and find out what the secret is behind their beauty

[ShadowHeart]

I LOVE her personality and how you described it. We need more astronomy ponies! I think it's super awesome how the stars are her family. Are you going to write a background story about her?

[StarTheAlicorn]

Sure am Im so glad you like her

[ShadowHeart]

np, can't wait to read it

[StarTheAlicorn]

Im also gunna upload her appearence soon.

[ShadowHeart]

Ooo! Can't wait! 

[Tiger]

Great improvement!

Does she ever wonder how she ended up in the orphanage though? Maybe one day she may go searching for clues  But it's your OC, not mine, so do what you want! 

Oh yeah, her age. I/We want to know what it is

But seriously, great improvement. 'Specially the cutie mark

[Blues-Music]

Yeah your O.C is great now!  See what a pony can accomplish by listening to constructive criticism people?

[ShadowHeart]

Yep. Tactful criticism always helps.