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Offline HunterOfTheDark

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Need Feedback!
« on: 2013 Oct 21, 21:45:04 »
Hey there everyone, I've been working on a fanfiction that needs some feedback, can you all help me out?

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/139467/demon-heart
Dig the wax out of your ears because I've got something to say! He takes the blazing sun in his bare hands and endures the searing heat. A mans man sustained by strength of will. When you hear of the great Kamina they're talking about me! You'd best remember that.