I would normally wait until you had more material to critique on, but what you have now does raise some concerns about your style.
I realize you are using first person narrative from Applebloom's perspective, but the accent and the misspellings due to that accent make it difficult to read the narration. It's fine for the dialogue, but I don't recommend her thinking in the same accent as she talks in. I would keep the narration as easy to read as possible while maintaining the narrating character's personality.
Also, you hardly made it 5 sentences before causing a drama explosion. There's not anywhere near enough development leading up to Applebloom bursting into tears, making the whole ordeal feel sudden. I also found it odd that the Cutie Mark Crusaders would recommend doing what their idol/older sister does. I would think they would have already considered that possibility before, unless of course the timeline of this event was nearer to the beginning of the Cutie Mark Crusaders's formation.