You have added the most besic things. You can also add her a Bio or a Family or both of them. I don't know...
You also want tips... Tips about what?
I meant I needed some tips on what else to add since I'm not really used to write OCs
I already answered on this, didn't I? You have occupation, you have physical appearance, you have age, gender, likes and dislikes. As I said the Bio
and the Family
won't be bad.... Check other topic is this board, they'll probably help you.
Yes, I do RP and I do have my OCs here, but you have added almost everything I do have, except the Bio , Family and Cutie Mark (I thought not to tell you, it's not the best).