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Can someone please give me ways to improve my art?
« on: 2016 Nov 21, 15:21:29 »
Can anyone please help me by pointing out anything I can improve on in my art? It would be a major help!











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Wow it would help if my pictures were to show  DD:
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« Last Edit: 2016 Nov 21, 15:23:02 by cloval »
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Re: Can someone please give me ways to improve my art?
« Reply #1 on: 2016 Nov 22, 07:37:30 »
@cloval fixed

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Improvement ideas?
« Reply #2 on: 2016 Nov 22, 07:46:42 »
Any ideas on how I could improve my art??







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Re: Improvement ideas?
« Reply #3 on: 2016 Nov 23, 03:47:51 »
Wow. All these drawings are pretty nice. I like them. Now, for some critical info.

Now that I got the idea on your style of drawing, here are a couple of improvements I think could be improved.

- The position of the legs could. On the second one with the pony in the night, I can see the right foreleg looking a bit weirdly drawn. The merpony drawing I thing could be lowered a bit, but probably not too much in need of a change.

-I could be slightly more picky. The muzzle size kinda varies with each drawing. Especially from the last one, which is noticeably shorter than the first two.


And that is about it for the possible improvements. You got pretty neat drawings. Hope this helps enough. You got great potential in art. Wish you the best in your drawing. ^-^
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