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Offline Reginald27

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Hi guys I haven't used this form for a while but recently I have had a story I would like to make into a comic, and the images are the characters developed so far for the story as well as my sketch for my first page

I would like to know if the colors or the look is ok for each character or what you would  suggest  I do diffrent, I know the lines are not clean and there is no shading I'm just keeping it basic for myself

 so please tell me what you think
http://rickthewolf.deviantart.com/art/Sketch32192349-518288061

http://rickthewolf.deviantart.com/art/Sketch4321328-518288225

http://rickthewolf.deviantart.com/art/Sketch54202638-518288396

http://rickthewolf.deviantart.com/art/Sketch54211530-518288616
« Last Edit: 2015 Mar 08, 12:41:06 by Reginald27 »
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique?
« Reply #1 on: 2015 Mar 05, 22:19:31 »
I really like the Frost King :)

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique?
« Reply #2 on: 2015 Mar 05, 22:29:58 »
Thank you he is a big main character i have made for my story  ^-^

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #3 on: 2015 Mar 08, 01:20:06 »
Love the look of this so far! Keep up the good work! :D
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #4 on: 2015 Mar 08, 12:10:10 »
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #5 on: 2015 Mar 11, 23:19:04 »
Funny or no I need to know

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #6 on: 2015 Mar 12, 10:50:00 »
oh dear "supa fly". I agree with Spike burn the book she learned that from and get her a book with new slang or at least 90's slang.

I thought it was funny. lol
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #7 on: 2015 Mar 13, 00:47:12 »
I'm going to plan to start adding color next time


Dang  :I
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #8 on: 2015 Mar 13, 07:25:32 »
THIS IS AWESOME STUFF!! :D

Seriously, good work :)
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #9 on: 2015 Mar 15, 19:37:00 »
This will be the first page of the comic now. Let me know if you like the look



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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #10 on: 2015 Mar 19, 09:05:17 »


And here Is how the pages should look colored
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #11 on: 2015 Mar 19, 12:25:01 »
i made a giftart of yer pony daisy cakes   ovO

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #12 on: 2015 Mar 19, 14:26:59 »
i made a giftart of yer pony daisy cakes   ovO

*have been literally staring at this gift art for the past half hour like O: speechless*

Like what? I-I I don't know what to say. This is just... wow! Your a wonderful artist (amazing in fact) and this is kinda like a "Sempi noticed me" kind of feeling but trade "Sempi" for "an amazingly talented artist that I respect and love there art style, just liked my stuff and even drew something for me as a gift!"  X3

I must send PM now and be speechless more brb
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #13 on: 2015 Mar 19, 15:21:13 »
*have been literally staring at this gift art for the past half hour like O: speechless*

Like what? I-I I don't know what to say. This is just... wow! Your a wonderful artist (amazing in fact) and this is kinda like a "Sempi noticed me" kind of feeling but trade "Sempi" for "an amazingly talented artist that I respect and love there art style, just liked my stuff and even drew something for me as a gift!"  X3

I must send PM now and be speechless more brb
haha knew i would leave ya in shock. but i am glad you liked it that much. i liked how her came out to almost look like cake frosting :D with is suiting since her CM is a cake slice bwa <3

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #14 on: 2015 Mar 19, 16:40:19 »
haha knew i would leave ya in shock. but i am glad you liked it that much. i liked how her came out to almost look like cake frosting :D with is suiting since her CM is a cake slice bwa <3

Exactly what I was going for but I'm jealous  you made her hair look much better than mine  lol
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #15 on: 2015 Mar 27, 18:17:33 »
please let me know what you think if next page so far and anything you suggest

P.s drawing Rarity's  face is the development to draw right now.

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #16 on: 2015 Mar 29, 09:45:19 »
Looking good!

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #17 on: 2015 Mar 30, 13:35:18 »
Do you guys want me to post the finished pages on this form or do you not care? :I
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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #18 on: 2015 Mar 30, 15:36:44 »
If you wish, but I think it should go into its own dedicated topic so that there aren't pages of comments in between the comics.

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Re: Hay guys could I get a critique? (first comic pages)
« Reply #19 on: 2015 Mar 30, 17:03:17 »
I like the diversity between your characters.  ^-^
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