I agree with Gingineer on two points,
A. It was indeed easy to visualize, and I always say that's the sign of a good author.
B. I hate malls.
It was fun, and happy. Two qualities I enjoy in anything.
The only negative thing I can say about it were the small word mistakes every here and there, but that's not a big deal.
This concludes my opinion of Part One, I'll edit this post later with my thoughts on Parts 2 and 3.
Avast ye UNHOLY spherical demon, hooves OFF my PRINCESS! Take thy madness and begone!
[Brandishes Custom Wooden Sword] Take that! And that!!
Needless to say, I enjoyed this one more than the first.
And that's a hard feat for me, considering the first had Pinkie in it.
This...Dreambolt pony, is quite the author.
He genuinely got me to laugh multiple times, and that doesn't happen very often, especially when I'm reading.
I still can't find any noticeable problems, and I'm looking forward to reading the next one.
This concludes my opinion of Part Two, again, I'll be editing this post for my opinion of Part 3 sometime today.
Well, that was a longer delay than I thought.
I had hoped in vain that Part Three would be even better than Two, but alas, this was not the case.
Not to say that it was bad, it still has good writing and well placed humor.
You just can't beat Princess Luna combating a spherical toy.
All in all, there's not much to say about this one.
I still enjoyed it, but neither RD nor Rarity are among my favorites, so it wasn't as enjoyable for me.
Only because of character preference of course.