Musical Works of Fiction Melody

[Fiction Melody]

Not sure if I'm doing this right or if I put this in the wrong place of the forum.
Anyways, here's a short demo I was working on.
I removed the vocals from the demo because... I'm too shy
I'll be updating this post with the links to the songs I publish in the future so they would be easy to find.
That's if I can actually do well with music.
I hope I'm off to a decent start.

Conspiracy (Demo)
https://soundcloud.com/fictionmelody/conspiracy-demo

[Enstramentall]

You're going to want this on the Audio section instead, but I say I really enjoyed it. I love how it went from piano to a really techno beat, I'll be bopping my head to this for a while!

[Fiction Melody]

Ah. Audio. Thanks.
Glad you liked it.

[Ryo_D_Disk]

Its not bad I must admit I muched prefered the Piano section before it hit the drums but thats probaly just my taste of music it didnt feel like it blended quite correctly however I guess thats why its a demo and your looking for some critasium i presume

[Fiction Melody]

I was looking for some feedback.
Thanks for letting me know what you think.

[Ryo_D_Disk]

Not a problem Listening to all the grand creative ponys is one of the reasons im here