My Origin Story

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Jagged Zircon

2015 Aug 22, 17:40:17 Last Edit: 2015 Aug 22, 17:54:19 by Jagged Zircon
Hello there everypony, in case you dont know me im Jagged Zircon, pleased to meet you guys  :3 . i feel that if i share a bit of background story maybe it may help you get to know me a bit, anyway:

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JAGGED ZIRCON:

A male Earth Pony; curiously, part of the Earth Pony variation of Bat Ponies, since he is the offspring, along with her sister, of the union between an Earth Pony and a Bat Pony. He is commander of Luna's Elite Force of Earth Ponies, his division stands proudly undefeated due the power and toughness of all its members, all earth Ponies. His talent resides in the strength of his hooves, as he can channel a great amount of concussive force from within to the ground, being able to open the earth below his hooves, cause and control low-scale earthquakes to hinder foes. It's know the great strength that Earth Ponies have naturally, but with this Pony, all that strength is multiplied by one hundred if that is his wish. He cares a lot about his unit, his friends and specially, her older sister, Moon Pearl. He loves her so much, and when she had the worst time in her life, he was there and helped to overcome her sadness and leave behind the past.

BACKSTORY:
He was born as the second offspring of Rayo de Esperanza and Evergreen Ramon in the Jungle of Yucatan Ponynsula. He was silent and shy during his foalhood, but if there was something he liked was playing with his sister Moon Pearl. They used to do everything together, and even if Jagged was unable to fly as her sister, she would always remain on the ground while playing tag. The only rule was no cheating....but her sister used to cheat anyway once in a while. It was a wonderful and funny sight for their mother. Never two siblings were that united by love. As the years passed, and when he was eight years old, problems in the maretremony started to caught both his and her sister attention, and they grew worried that they fathers would separate. Moon Pearl would always try to comfort her brother, easing his fears....but deep down she knew that sad times were coming. Shortly after that, both of her parents decided to separate, and keep custody of each of them separately, forcing the young ponies to separate in a painful moment that would scar Jagged's heart. Even more, Moon Pearl had secretly stitched a scarf that she was planning to give to his brother for his birthday, which would be just in one week from that day, but due the events unfolding, she had no choice of giving the scarf to his brother as a parting memento instead of a birthday present, making him promise that, no matter what, they would be together again one day, and that he would wear the scarf always for her.

And so Jagged and his father departed, Jagged would still write letters to his mother and sister, and he would continue studying, while his father, caring for anything except his work, would provide only the basic needs that his offspring needed...but never love or care to his son. Jagged begin to be resentful, grow bitter and angry with the pass of the years, as the only love and comfort he would ever find was only in paper, the letters from the two ponies that really loved him. One fateful day, he had a strong discussion with his father, about how it was possible he was so selfish and rude with him, with his mother and about the fact that he seemed to care about nothing except money. His father told him that he didn't understand a thing about grown up matters, but jagged was no fool at all. The discussion escalated and his father gave jagged a buck in the face. The Pony fell to the ground...and for the first time he felt hate towards his father, hate towards the pony in front of him. That hate was the primer to unlock his hidden potential, or at least to wake it up. Jagged rose from the ground, bruising his muzzle in pain, and went to his room, but not before his father could notice that, at the moment he gave him a cold, hateful stare, the ground slightly started to shake. Up in his room, jagged was seeing the sky through the window, thinking about his sister and mom, and then he went to sleep. That night, he earned his cutie mark while dreaming about the good times he had with his mom and sister; a Zircon gem standing at the top of a red, jagged symbol. In Yucatekan alphabet, that symbol represents courage, toughness, and strong personality, tempered with compassion and love. One particular morning, his father was more upset than normal due his findings and reports, all in a book he wrote, weren't popular and weren't selling well. Jagged showed concern to his father, but Evergreen didn't pay attention to him. He was so furious and frustrated, that he started to shout nonsense to his soon. That he was to blame as he never truly supported him, that it was his entire fault. Evergreen was so furious that he lost his mind for a moment. Jagged couldn't stand anymore, and stomped his hooves on the ground, out of rage.....the ground in the entire village they were living started to shake and crack. The house they were living was damaged badly. The houses around the village suffered damage as well. All the Ponies noticed that the origin of the earthquake was in the house of the Explorer pony, and Evergreen was afraid of his own son....calling him a monster. Jagged watched in awe the destruction he caused, and how the other ponies were looking at him with fear. But then, his awe turned into rage, and he didn't felt any guilt or remorse for what he did. On the contrary, seeing that everypony around was looking at him with angry and fearful eyes, he thought that they well deserved what happened. And then, he returned to his room to pick one thing before leaving that place for good; the scarf that her sister made for him. When he came out of the house the police Ponies where waiting for him, but after watching the damage he could cause, nopony moved a muscle to stop him. He passed by their side, and when he was out the village, he started to cry. He didn't mean what happened, or what he was thinking. It was good that nopony was hurt, but he couldn't stand any longer in that village.

He sought for a new place to live, embarking himself in a travel where came across Dragons, Griffons, and all sort of creatures. Also he learned to control his inner power to certain extent; it took months of practice and lots of concentration and will. Eventually he found a nice, quiet and colorful place, where all sort of ponies lived together: Ponyville. Life there was wonderful, everypony was nice with him, everypony wanted to smile, and they only requested a smile back. Jagged finally felt in home. The following years would be happy; he started to work as a blacksmith pony, life was looking good after all this time, but still he was missing his mom and his sister, so much that he secretly wished that he would give everything, anything just for the joy of seeing her again. And his wish was granted; few months later, his sister would come, knock on his door and would fulfill her promise: they were together again. Jagged was then told of all that happened to her, and he was unable to believe how could she suffer that much in so little time. His own suffering in the past months was nothing compared, and the fact that she was so scarred in her soul that she was unable to fly was too much for him to watch. Moon Pear herself was just a mere shadow of her former, beautiful self. She was emaciated, almost in the bones, her mane was messy, she had bruises and scratches all over her body, and the bags in her eyes were the living proof that there was no day or night she didn't spent crying. Jagged offered her food and shelter, the Bat Pony would die in one week if left alone. He would take care of her sister until she was strong enough again to help her with her main problem; her self-inflicted handicap in her wings. It took days of work and emotional support, but in the end, Jagged managed to help her sister to take flight again.

After witnessing and celebrate the return of the lost Moon Princess after a millennium, Jagged wanted to become part of Luna's army to protect her sister and everypony in this town he now considered his home, but he didn't think ahead that his own sister would also want to join to Luna's army. She insisted and in the end she ended up enlisting at the same time as he did. Stubborn as always, but he knew that her sister's stubbornness was one of her best qualities, as both were cut from the same three.

and yep thats about just me but i have many other hobbies and such if you wish to know :)

Moon Pearl

It's also our story right? ^-^



All Units. Battle Formation. Break Through the Front

Jagged Zircon


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